I Thank You God For: a Most Amazing Imagination

i thank you God for: a most amazing imagination
     By Dane Smith_Johnsen in the style of ee cummings

dearest and most loving God, thank i you for most an amazing 
imagination: for softly animal floating fluffs that a summer day amuses;
and wings myself to fly there and here or stars beyond everywhere; 
and for dreams of day afar the heart does seize and behind pictures my eyes.

(i who beneath myself, in a corner was cowered or amid table legs;
this day refreshed by fantastical thoughts;  free reality to escape;
and for successes’ place by dreams enveloped with great satisfaction.
The wonderful happy place no ill words spoken will ever be.) 

how should dreaming, envisioning, illusion, conceiving, thinking
and supposing at all-elevate to the yes
of  any everything-concrete purely a continuation
uncertainty  invoke vagueness; reality.

(now the heart of my heart paints things that are real-unreal
the soul of my soul believes everything conjured, a dream.)



In inspired by Michelle Nold Godleske's
Tribute to E. E. Comings  poetry contest.
(It's a big stretch...)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 22, 2009 at 2:58 PM
Congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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May 22, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Warmest congrats Dane, now you are First Place winner! So well deserved! Love, Shar (Have a beautiful weekend!)
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May 22, 2009 at 6:41 AM
Terrific job, Dane Ann...Congratulations on your 2nd place winning poem! ~ Love, Carrie
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May 21, 2009 at 11:53 PM
Congrats on your success in Michele's contest Dane Rgds Brian
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April 13, 2009 at 4:52 PM
You have a wonderful imagination that flows freely through your poetry, Dane Ann. Good luck in the contest! (e e cummings would be proud) Love, Carolyn
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April 13, 2009 at 3:44 PM
It's a beauty. A journey of positive enchantment. Your words carry me away and make my own imagination soar. An awesome and dreamy write. Wonderful entry for the contest. Good luck! Love, Shar
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