I Take the Blame

All by myself, alone, I softly chant your name,
Own up for our defunct weeping bond and I take the blame.
It was our love very pure and not lusty lure,
Unsure, kaput and insecure I thirstily quest for love’s cure……

Cannot truly imagine that I let you go, I own up and take the blame,
But for us to be happy I did so, To silently blow off our love’s flame…..
My heart I am sure you did not know,
Was tattered and torn from the time I let you go,

I wish our bonds could have fondly stayed on,
Woven intertwined with emotions, enameled with love’s lacquerers firmly bound.
But I still take the blame,
Too late for me as this body I had lit and set aflame.
Till our laden guilt we overcame….

From above as my body burned,
Saw your woeful self  as you wailed in lament and yearned

I take the blame.It is now too late, I take the blame

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/11/2012 10:13:00 PM
Congratulations Sashi, I loved your poem. -Seren
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Date: 10/12/2012 10:53:00 AM
thank you very much for your wishes Seren..~sashi
Date: 10/9/2012 8:41:00 PM
SASHI, , congratulations, with your awesome poem in MICHAEL'S contest..... xox~pd
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Date: 10/10/2012 12:11:00 PM
thanx a million for the wishes PD...~ sashi
Date: 10/9/2012 8:12:00 PM
A touching heartfelt write! Congrats on your awesome win! Hugs
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Date: 10/9/2012 8:14:00 PM
thank you Cecilia......~sashi
Date: 10/9/2012 12:41:00 PM
A very interesting write. Congratulations on the win.
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 10/9/2012 8:08:00 PM
than x Carol...~sashi
Date: 10/9/2012 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your first win, Sashi. This is really awesome! :) hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/9/2012 8:08:00 PM
thank you Lenora .....~sashi
Date: 10/9/2012 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Sashi. Love, Carol
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 10/9/2012 8:09:00 PM
thank you Carol...~sashi
Date: 10/8/2012 7:57:00 PM
beautifully written poem my friend Sashi..congrats on your Big win!! (^_^)
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 10/9/2012 8:12:00 PM
than you very much Maria....~sashi
Date: 10/8/2012 7:57:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win. beautiful poem. Lee
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Date: 10/9/2012 8:11:00 PM
thank you Lee,...........~sashi
Date: 10/8/2012 7:20:00 PM
a deeply moving poem, sad, touching. Congratulations on your win.
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 10/9/2012 8:13:00 PM
thanks Debbie...~sashi
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 10/9/2012 8:11:00 PM
thank you JOann.....~sashi
Date: 10/8/2012 5:29:00 PM
Such risks we take without safety nets! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 10/8/2012 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful first place win with this moving entry Sashi.
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Date: 10/9/2012 8:12:00 PM
thank you Connie......~sashi
Date: 10/8/2012 4:19:00 PM
Congrats on 1st place in my Blame contest... moving on all level my friend... Michael
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 10/9/2012 8:16:00 PM
thank you very much Michael.... nearly every word is true except the a lillitle bit towards the end ..........very emotional project for me....~sashi
Date: 9/20/2012 7:48:00 AM
sad write. if you shorten it to 15 lines, you could enter it in michael's contest...just a thought :)
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 9/20/2012 12:46:00 PM
thanks ... ill do that...~sashi
Date: 9/20/2012 12:53:00 AM
Sad write.It makes us feel never to let go hope.
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Date: 9/20/2012 12:45:00 PM
thanx ...........~sashi
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