Dalia Shahein Poet Romanticism

I Swear My Beloved

Every drop of blood in my body boils more than a volcano
Every heart beat I feel it like a dagger torturing me
My vains are making a revelation inside of my weak body
Every inch of me screaming out your name
Wondering where you are...
Myself refuse to recognize me , not until you come
My thoughts bended me cold and alone , refused to help me
From head to toe everything needs you
After you left....
I have a frozen heart , lost soul and helpless body
I'm struggling with my demons
I'm burning and dieing from inside, and I wish I'm dieing fast...no , slowly
Death is having pleasure hearing my heart screaming out , feeling my pain , tasting my open wounds...
Not much left but yet , death is taking his time
I'm not me anymore - and all what I wish and pray for...
Is to have you here....
To hold you one time , feel the warmth of your heart
I don't have strength to break my silence walls and scream your name
But I swear my beloved...
To try , I swear my beloved to use my last breath but..
To never give up....

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Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2016 at 8:35 AM - A beautiful poem with much emotion ...... life is not always "pink" - I wish you a lovely weekend, Dalia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Dalia Shahein January 30, 2016 at 6:41 AM Thank you very much my dear and your surly right , I wish you a lovely weekend and sorry fir replying late , many thanks again for the lovely visit and the beautiful comment , hugs / / :)

White Sage January 25, 2016 at 11:57 AM not giving up in love is great, just as not giving up on love...i hope tomorrow be a better day Dalia Shahein January 25, 2016 at 2:09 PM Lol , yes I think so , thanks for the lovely visit, hugs / / :)

Paul Schneiter January 4, 2016 at 2:12 PM Dalia, you communicate a level of love for your cherished one that is exceptionally powerful and convincing. Your vivid imagery, in combination w/ strong action verbs, makes that possible. Well done--Bravo! Dalia Shahein January 4, 2016 at 4:53 PM Thank you very much my friend for ur supportive words and your pleasant, delightful and sweet comment , it means alot for me....many thanks and hugs....// :)

Skat A December 19, 2015 at 6:23 PM Dalia, a wonderful poem, both sweet and deep.. SKAT Dalia Shahein December 19, 2015 at 6:37 PM Thank u very much my dear SKAT, I'm glad u stopped by ....lot of love and hugs // merry Christmas sweet heart...../ :)

Justin Bordner December 19, 2015 at 3:22 AM You have one power over Death that repells it's cold attempt to take your life, you have a love that destroys death's jealous desire for you...your Beloved is the warmth that frightens Death into the shadows my Violet Poetess. Your unavoidable need to hold the heart of the one you love I feel, and share. This poem spreads the wings of love! Your hot and honest emotions are so powerful...J.A.B. Dalia Shahein December 19, 2015 at 3:32 AM Thanks alot my friend for ur sweet sweet comment and ur amazing feedback , I really do appreciate....

Eve Roper December 18, 2015 at 8:20 PM Showing emotions is hard for some your feeling's are warm and soft.Merry Christmas! Dalia Shahein December 18, 2015 at 8:48 PM Thanks alot my dear I can't get but warm when it comes to love...emotions what keeps us alive...thank you 4 visiting and merry Christmas for u 2 my dear...lot of love and hugs...// :)