Anisha Dutta Poet Rhyme

I Surrender

I SURRENDER 
                                                                                
        Mystic misty night took entry.
        Sky spreading starry tapestry:
                        Charm and wonder!
                                                           
        Sea waves rolling roaring swell, bulge.
       Aqua opulence drifting in surge:
                       Simple splendor!

      Forest full of flora-fauna.
      calls my curious persona.
                       Wish to wander.

         Magic and marvels of Nature
         Sometimes miracles to capture.
                                 Smart rejoinder.
                          
        Lilac lavender love trying to feel
         with glamorous amorous thrill:
                                Ardent ardor!    
                                    
        I surrender.


  07/17/20
                                                             
                                                                        First place

   Strand Completely New (10)   Contest by Brian Strand

   
    'Battle of Most Acclaimed Poems  2020 '   Contest by John Hamilton

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Line Gauthier February 7, 2021 at 9:34 AM Perfect closing line, Anisha. It's a pleasure to find this lovely poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology~

John Hamilton January 8, 2021 at 12:08 PM Congrats Anisha on a nice win!

Jeanne Mcgee July 17, 2020 at 9:54 AM Beautiful sentiments. Congrats on your top win. Anisha Dutta July 17, 2020 at 11:06 PM Thanks Jeanne. Love

JC Brul July 17, 2020 at 8:15 AM Love write..Superb imagery in a silky soft alliteration.Congratulations on your 1st place win!! A favourite!

Joanna Daniel July 16, 2020 at 11:59 PM Nice poem, Anisha:)