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I Surrender

I SURRENDER Mystic misty night took entry. Sky spreading starry tapestry: Charm and wonder! Sea waves rolling roaring swell, bulge. Aqua opulence drifting in surge: Simple splendor! Forest full of flora-fauna. calls my curious persona. Wish to wander. Magic and marvels of Nature Sometimes miracles to capture. Smart rejoinder. Lilac lavender love trying to feel with glamorous amorous thrill: Ardent ardor! I surrender. 07/17/20 First place Strand Completely New (10) Contest by Brian Strand 'Battle of Most Acclaimed Poems 2020 ' Contest by John Hamilton

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Date: 2/7/2021 9:34:00 AM
Perfect closing line, Anisha. It's a pleasure to find this lovely poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology~
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Date: 1/8/2021 12:08:00 PM
Congrats Anisha on a nice win!
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Date: 7/17/2020 9:54:00 AM
Beautiful sentiments. Congrats on your top win.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/17/2020 11:06:00 PM
Thanks Jeanne. Love
Date: 7/17/2020 8:15:00 AM
Love write..Superb imagery in a silky soft alliteration.Congratulations on your 1st place win!! A favourite!
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Date: 7/16/2020 11:59:00 PM
Nice poem, Anisha:)
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