I Strive

Why shall I freeze my dreams?
Why can’t I let them flow?
While some maybe hopeless,
But some may tend to grow.

You find me as an ugly rock,
Some think I am a worthy stone,
But do you know who am I?
Just jumbled flesh and bone.

I have tasted many failures,
Still I strive towards my goal,
Tell me not success is sour,
You cannot silence my soul.

I shall keep my hope alive,
Till the night is bright as day,
The only time I shall give up,
When death comes in my way.

Some may tend to love me,
And some may tend to hate,
I keep dwelling in my dreams,
I am the master of my fate.


Inspired by the line- I am the master of my fate - by William Ernest  Henley
Feb 06, 2020.
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Staton Avatar
March 6, 2020 at 8:19 AM
What a lovely poem with a nice poetic rhythm!
Lindley Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Congratulations on your win. God bless..
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 2:27 PM
I encourage everyone to make their dreams a reality. This is lovely Meenakshi. Congratulations on your deserving Second Placement! : ) xxoo
Karmakar Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 2:26 PM
that's the spirit, great. wishing best of luck my dear poet. regards. sk.
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 9:46 AM
- A great and inspirational poem Meenakshi, congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Somadas Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 7:34 AM
I am the master of my fate.... What a positive statement to end the poem.. Beautifully penned.. Congrats on your win..
One Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 6:19 AM
Never lose hope.. always keep the faith.. great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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