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I Still Smile

She looked at me as if to say "be mine" And in return I smiled for I was shy The moment passed and she moved on alone And I stayed here for I was shy you see The sun still sets in flaming reds each night A silver moon still lights a love's first kiss The coyote barks as if to say "come dance" And so the night still holds the same mystique Tho' years have passed and you are not the same And I am old but I still smile at times For I recall unspoken words -"be mine" Then tear drops fall - where did you go my love 5/22/2017 for contest Blank Verse II

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Date: 6/17/2017 5:17:00 PM
Larry, this is a lovely, bittersweet poem! Congrats on your win. Thanks for entering my contest. Janice
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 6/17/2017 9:51:00 PM
Thank you, Janice. I had never tried blank verse before and I appreciate the placement and the pportunity!

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