Vince Suzadail Jr. Poet Rhyme

I Still Do

Do you ever dream of better times
Of peaceful days and nursery rhymes
When love and faith walk hand in hand
War and hate are forever banned
Do you believe there will be a day
When peace and love are here to stay
Better times for me and you
Keep believing. I still do
Do you ever say a silent prayer
That all mankind begins to care
Where leaders leave their ivory tower
And do not succumb to greed and power
Respect for life comes shining through
Please keep praying. I still do
Do you believe the day will come
When man will be delivered from
All the pain and all the sorrow
Finding hope in a bright tomorrow
Dreaming dreams that do come true
Believe in those dreams. I still do

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Izzy Gumbo May 2, 2009 at 6:38 AM I do too my friend. Brilliant and beautiful Vince! "Dreaming dreams that do come true Believe in those dreams. I still do" We are the dream. Your words are true, dreaming of Us, dreaming of You. Creating a better world, we all can do. Love and hugs tooooo!

Sue Mason March 29, 2009 at 12:14 PM God Help Us All falls out of my mind on a daily basis ... gets scarier anyway ... smile ... awesome write, Vince. When is your birthday? I'd like to add you to my jingle blog ... just the day and month will do ...

Robin Maughan March 21, 2009 at 7:34 AM Harmony but poignant ..every line..poetry is such a wonderful thing!!! Write on!!! Hugs, Robin

K K Iloduba Jnr March 20, 2009 at 4:00 PM tnx for ur commentry on my poem-AFTER SCHOOL........i still do!

Nassira Merahi March 20, 2009 at 7:12 AM I like this one! This writing is so full of hope and strenght, its message is peace and harmony. You have said it so nicely Vince and I thank you for sharing it with the world. I thank you for appreciating my "proposition of morality" also. Salam (peace) - Nassira

Arany P. March 17, 2009 at 5:57 AM an excellent write, Vince... it was so touching! ~ Arany

David Smalling March 16, 2009 at 10:19 AM I am new to poetry soup and did not even see the feature, perhaps I do not know how or when to locate it. I can locate my appreciation of your write on the dream though. It is very good. Thanks for reading my poem, God bless you.

Robin L. Gass March 15, 2009 at 7:50 PM This is beautiful, Vince! The rhyme is perfect and I love the inspirational message. We all need to keep hope alive and praying for better days. Excellent piece! Love, Robin

Joseph Spence Sr March 15, 2009 at 1:45 PM Hello Vince, this is just awesome. I like the rhyming scheme and the theme of the poem. It's right on point. I still do also. Great job! ~Joseph

Madisyn Collier March 15, 2009 at 5:16 AM This is a beautiful, touching poem. Excellent!

Brian Anderson March 15, 2009 at 4:35 AM this poem reminds me of one of my favorite songs, "Imagine". I'm sure John is smiling down on this one. beautiful write

Belinda Parish March 13, 2009 at 10:12 AM An absolute wonderful hopeful write. I love the way you repeat 'I still do'. Excellent!

Arany P. March 13, 2009 at 8:46 AM well written message! wish it wasn't only a dream for some of us!! ~ Arany

John Rhinem March 12, 2009 at 7:40 PM ....that "Prayer" is the best thing that anyone could ever hope for or do!!!~Smile~ And I shall "Always" believe this!!! For, to be able to 'Ever' live with the utopia which You have described and desired within "This Beautiful Write," only "Heaven," could ever make it come to pass~ And someday shall!!!!~" My Love Always To 'You & All Your Loves,' John!!!"~"Perfect Write Vincent!!!":)

John Rhinem March 12, 2009 at 7:33 PM Smile~I do too Brother!!~"Hello My Talented & Beautiful Friend Vince Suzadail Jr.!!!"~I hope that life has been treating "You & Your Loves" wonderfully!!? What a gentle, hopeful and peacefully longing write this is here!!!~I have "Always" said to people throughout my life....cont....

Laurie Ginn March 12, 2009 at 6:59 PM If I was to tell the truth somewhere I think I stopped dreaming. I still always think everything will always turn out all right but to think about the leaders stepping in line and ruling for the good of mankind,,,I didnt realise until I read this,,,I lost that somewhere.

Kristin Reynolds March 12, 2009 at 4:27 PM I do, too Vince, they are a'comin. beautiful mesage here, love, Kristin

Raul Moreno March 12, 2009 at 3:50 PM Nice flow, I believe in those dreams...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire March 12, 2009 at 2:01 PM This is a very touching poem, Vince, and we would all do well to abide by its message. In spite of everything that happens in the world today, like you, I still believe. Excellent poem, Vince! Love, Carolyn

Sharon Winter March 12, 2009 at 12:43 PM I think I will echo the sentiments of my friend Fred, who commented extremely well. I will keep praying, and I will keep believing this dream will come true. A beautiful poem that fills the heart with the greatest hope. An exceptional write. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards March 12, 2009 at 9:50 AM Loved this hopeful poem! Thank goodness the human spirit lives on in spite of dire times. I have often wondered how people endure worse things than we will see in our lifetime....but there is an inborn strength, and vision of hope, having faith that dreams can come true.. We can never cave in to complete despair ~ Love, Carrie

Tyesha Ehigiator March 12, 2009 at 9:37 AM So Beautifully written Vince, So much faith and optimism here..I do have dreams where I see everyone getting along, helping each other out,no hatred, no discrimination, no war,no pain or suffering but so much love, peace,joy and contentment..I pray for this always...I will hold onto my faith and continue to pray for brighter and better days...I believe that dreams do come true but I leave it all in Gods Hands..He is the only one that can work miracles. Lovely write..GB, Tyesha

Reggie Roman March 12, 2009 at 9:36 AM Great poem Im now a fan!

Christopher Higgins March 12, 2009 at 9:36 AM I am glad the voice in this poem is still holding out on the world blending in harmony.. unfortunately I don't think that will ever be because we are humans and our shortcomings won't allow us to be without strife. Lovely poem.

Wilfredo Derequito March 12, 2009 at 9:30 AM To paraphrase the late John Lennon: "You may say you're a dreamer but you're not the only one. And I'm joining you in this one so the world will live as one." Yes, just like you, I still do too, Mr. Vince Suzadail Jr, because when we stop dreaming for better things, we might as well be dead. Regards, Fred