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I Stand On Sand

I stand on sand Nothing concrete I move to prove That I’ve got feet Not able to be stable I start to sink The tears through the years Is what I think It’s here I fear I stand alone Looking down I frown My covers blown I made the grade Long time ago I got afraid and paid What did I know? To late for fate It passed me by This time of mine I can’t deny I stand on sand Nothing concrete No time to climb My maker to meet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/28/2010 8:17:00 PM
Life isn't over until it is over, my friend. Your poem is very well written, great quatrain, though a bit on the downside. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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