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I Spy Eel Pie

'It seems surreal,' whispered the eel, 'and I'm unsure what that is for.' He nodded then towards my pen. He wriggled round without a sound, and quite aghast, he scribbled fast, his mouth around the pen I'd found - and here I quote the words he wrote: 'I am an eel so here's the deal - no jelly stuff * (I'm far too tough).' And then tight-lipped, he duly flipped into the sea, and winked at me. I waved bye-bye, and floated high above the crowds who sat on clouds... *jellied eel for Nina's Surreal contest

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Date: 12/17/2020 12:16:00 AM
Great one, Jack. Your rhyme and rhythm are spot on and your imagination is out in full force. This is the kind of dream I have after eating mushrooms that have gone bad. Enjoy your day ~ John
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Date: 12/16/2020 8:00:00 PM
This is "eely" funny, Jack. It has such amazing roots in Ogden Nash and Dr. Seuss. This would be a fun poem for kids (and those of us who don't plan to grow up ala Peter Pan):) They would love to put it into artwork! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/16/2020 4:37:00 PM
Dropping back with my Congrats on your win..
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Date: 12/16/2020 4:11:00 PM
Very cool. I wish she would allow old poems . i have a few like this one that I'd love to show off again. BIG congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 12/16/2020 3:23:00 PM
Hi Jack, What a fun, clever and creative write. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/16/2020 2:23:00 PM
Fun engaging poem! Congratulations for your win Jack. xomo
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Date: 12/12/2020 11:09:00 AM
So creative, fantastic imagination and great fun - 'I am an eel, so here's the deal - no jelly stuff (I'm far too tough).' Love this write, when I first joined poetry soup I posted a poem called 'Enter Neolina', perhaps you will enjoy it'. Thanks for sharing this great write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/11/2020 12:49:00 PM
Very cure and creative, Jack . I'm eely impressed :) Regards // paul
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Date: 12/10/2020 3:15:00 PM
Well, I think your imagination is running wild. LOL..Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 12/10/2020 1:18:00 PM
Beautifully done, Winning wishes
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Date: 12/10/2020 12:42:00 PM
ha ha ha what a surreal poem indeed my friend, I cant imagine anyone eating eel and covered in jelly eww no:-) hugs jan xx
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