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I Sometimes Feel Like

I sometimes feel like... a wobbly tornado making my way what ever direction the wind blows with back and forth motion and no way of knowing how destructive the path that I am flowing I sometimes feel like... a wave on the ocean tossed back and forth in erratic motion the salt from my tears help with my knowing how shallow or deep these days I am coping I sometimes feel like... a cloud in the sky while on top of things some still pass me by dealing with fluff in the midst of this life amongst other stuff as I look to the sky I sometimes feel like... the wildest of flowers in a field filled with weeds passing the hours wanting someone to come along and pull me out or take a sling blade and cut us all down I sometimes feel like... a musician on tour I know that I'm here but at times why, I'm not sure could be any number of things between the why's and what for's but one things for sure I feel like all this and more

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Date: 1/29/2018 9:45:00 AM
Wonderful! Joy to read :) skillfully laid wise eloquence Mike xomo!
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Date: 1/29/2018 8:38:00 AM
I like the way you described your feelings..." Like a wildflower..." is one of them...All the best Mike
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Date: 1/29/2018 8:37:00 AM
Awesome depictions and imagery Mike; I think we can all relate to this well penned write!~Che :)
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