I Sit Myself Down

I sit myself down  

where one could hear a pin drop . . .

poetry clamors

aug 31, 2019
for Silent One's Silence Contest
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Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 6:40 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Great take on the contest with a creative Senryu.
Andresen Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 5:54 AM
- Congratulations on your 2st place win, Andrea :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 3:16 PM
Congrats on your placement in the contest..
Ravidas Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 4:59 AM
That's what a ringing silence is. Literally. Perfectly pinned)
Godwin Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 7:47 PM
I don't know how this fared in the contest but I am FAVing it - this is absolutely genius and quote worthy, should be embroidered and/or cross stitched on pillows, material for framing, and definitely held in poetic reverence for all of posterity (I initially typed prosperity!). AWESOME and WOW Love ... CayCay
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 7:06 PM
I think Silent will enjoy this entry Andrea. A poet's poem! ; ) xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 9:45 AM
Succinct and exactly write.
Parker Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 9:42 PM
if the pin drops would it still be silent?...good luck dear poet
Rodrigues Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 9:42 PM
Yes! In the silent place!
Y. Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Hi Andrew, In a few words you did great with contest theme. Enjoy the rest of your weekend my friend. PS, I like you new avatar/ photo by the way:-) Alexis
Anish Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 7:36 PM
I am glad you used the 5 7 5 format! Poetry creeps into the mind when you do not expect it to - as you well know! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Bauer Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 4:46 PM
oh, this is perfect, andrea! best of luck in the contest...
Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 4:18 PM
So to the point..only you can deliver such a theme on silence in just a few words.
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