I Sit Gazing By the Candlelight

I sit gazing by the candlelight
Trying to see my paper so I can write
A poem for you with a theme that’s right
So everyone can read about our plight
Know our whole story and gain insight
Of overcoming odds we had to fight
That made a bond that withstood all might
Which told the truth because we had the rite
But does have a passion that does excite
That pulls you in slowly and holds you tight
Makes you hang on the words from day to night
With an ending that is full of delight
And has a morel of love that will never be finite
All done as I sit gazing by the candlelight

For Russell Sivey's By CandleLight contest
Written by Kevin Clark
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 8:20 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "By Candlelight" contest Kevin. Love,Carol
Clark Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 4:01 PM
Thanks Carol
Merryman Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Congrats on your win, Kevin! Love, Kim
Clark Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 4:43 AM
Thanks Kim for your comments.
Poet Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 11:33 AM
Kevin congrats on your win.Enjoyed the read.
Clark Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 6:29 PM
Thanks Kash
Taylor Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 7:23 PM
Congrats, Kevin. Awesome. Great job. Nice going. Ralph
Clark Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 6:29 PM
Thanks Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 7:00 PM
congrats Kevin on an exciting win for this wonderful creation on candlelight luv.. most elelgant expressions and use of rhyme ..happy weekend..luv..
Clark Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 6:30 PM
Thanks my Sweetheart
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 3:56 PM
Congrats, Kevin, on your win in the Candlelight contest and thanks for your lovely comments today. Hope you have a great weekend. Blessings, Rhonda
Clark Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 6:30 PM
Thanks Rhonda and have a good weekend yourself.
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 3:51 PM
I realize I already saw this one!! Let me find another, Kevin!
Williams Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 1:34 AM
Kevin great entree for the contest, good luck..David
Clark Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 4:37 AM
Thanks David for your comments
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 10:54 PM
way to do the monorhyme contest, Kevin. the ITE rhyme is a great choice for this!
Clark Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 4:38 AM
Thanks Andrea for your comments.
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