I Sit Gazing By the Candlelight

I sit gazing by the candlelight
Trying to see my paper so I can write
A poem for you with a theme that’s right
So everyone can read about our plight
Know our whole story and gain insight
Of overcoming odds we had to fight
That made a bond that withstood all might
Which told the truth because we had the rite
But does have a passion that does excite
That pulls you in slowly and holds you tight
Makes you hang on the words from day to night
With an ending that is full of delight
And has a morel of love that will never be finite
All done as I sit gazing by the candlelight

For Russell Sivey's By CandleLight contest
Written by Kevin Clark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/12/2012 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "By Candlelight" contest Kevin. Love,Carol
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Kevin Clark
Date: 3/12/2012 4:01:00 PM
Thanks Carol
Date: 3/11/2012 5:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kevin! Love, Kim
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Kevin Clark
Date: 3/12/2012 4:43:00 AM
Thanks Kim for your comments.
Date: 3/10/2012 11:33:00 AM
Kevin congrats on your win.Enjoyed the read.
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Kevin Clark
Date: 3/10/2012 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Kash
Date: 3/9/2012 7:23:00 PM
Congrats, Kevin. Awesome. Great job. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 3/10/2012 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Ralph
Date: 3/9/2012 7:00:00 PM
congrats Kevin on an exciting win for this wonderful creation on candlelight luv.. most elelgant expressions and use of rhyme ..happy weekend..luv..
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Date: 3/10/2012 6:30:00 PM
Thanks my Sweetheart
Date: 3/9/2012 3:56:00 PM
Congrats, Kevin, on your win in the Candlelight contest and thanks for your lovely comments today. Hope you have a great weekend. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/10/2012 6:30:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda and have a good weekend yourself.
Date: 3/9/2012 3:51:00 PM
I realize I already saw this one!! Let me find another, Kevin!
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Date: 3/7/2012 1:34:00 AM
Kevin great entree for the contest, good luck..David
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Kevin Clark
Date: 3/7/2012 4:37:00 AM
Thanks David for your comments
Date: 3/6/2012 10:54:00 PM
way to do the monorhyme contest, Kevin. the ITE rhyme is a great choice for this!
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Kevin Clark
Date: 3/7/2012 4:38:00 AM
Thanks Andrea for your comments.
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