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I Sit and Study Her

Pensive is what I think for I have given her a smile But received nothing in return Deep I thought, possibly an artist, A writer, a philosopher, a teacher, a mom. She probably has a million things happening. If I sat down and said hi, it would be rude. If I brought her food or a drink She might be frightened. So I sit on this side of the room Where we are both comfortable, Studying her, taking notes. I am doing a little character sketch and a full poem, for she has a lovely face. Deep in thought, I do not see or hear her leave.

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Date: 5/6/2020 4:23:00 PM
I LOVED how this turned around to where YOU became the pensive one so involved you did not notice her leave!! Fave.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/7/2020 1:16:00 AM
Thank you Andrea; it ended and I said "What?" But Trixie had left with her.
Date: 5/6/2020 9:29:00 AM
I agree with Pixie. You have an eye for art, & heart for (the Craetor's) world. shalom, shalom/Peace // "PAZ" as Thomas says.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/7/2020 1:16:00 AM
Thank you Anil. I do speak whether anyone is listening or not.
Date: 5/6/2020 7:59:00 AM
Ah, priceless !
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/7/2020 1:16:00 AM
Thank you Pixie; I see you too have been here, studying this stranger.

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