Dinda Minardi Poet Senryu

I Sipped Chocolate In Your Kiss

(30/10/2011)

It was my first kiss
Heated by your warm soft lips
Sweets from your lips’ tips

Intertwined desires
I sipped chocolate of your lips
Our blood pumped in whiz

Dinda Minardi
For Michael J. Falotico contest
"Kiss Like a Fruit"

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Matthew Anish December 26, 2011 at 6:48 PM Did you win the contest? I like the phrase "choclate of your lips. Peace & love Matthew Anish

Elizabeth Wesley December 16, 2011 at 9:12 AM A guaranteed way to get more, a nice goal to have when it's the right person. Enjoyed the taste! :)

Kash Poet November 13, 2011 at 10:00 AM Very nice Senryu on kiss.I am a male from India.I think you are a lady/girl.Isn't it?

Carol Sunshine Brown November 7, 2011 at 6:18 AM A belated congratulations I am sending you for your win in Michael's "A Kiss Like Fruit" contest Dinda. Love, Carol

Jack Horne November 6, 2011 at 6:28 AM Lovely romantic piece. Many congrats on all your wins too, Dinda : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 6, 2011 at 5:03 AM Congrats Dinda on a fantastic win with a chocolate delight so tasty luv...yum

Kash Poet November 5, 2011 at 6:51 AM Very nice Dinda.Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich November 4, 2011 at 8:23 PM well, who says chocolate cannot be a fruit? Yummy! And congrats on your win.

Michael J. Falotico November 4, 2011 at 2:59 PM Congrats my dear sweet poet friend.... Hey luv we need to collab again... Let me know... love Michael

Black Eyed Susan November 3, 2011 at 8:50 AM sounds yummy. i bet he'll love this :)

James Fraser November 1, 2011 at 2:44 PM This has just got to be a winner Dinda, nice one :)

Elizabeth Wesley October 30, 2011 at 5:10 PM Sounds scrumptious sweetie, can't get enough of this sweet rhyme. All the best in the contest!

M.I.A . October 30, 2011 at 4:15 PM soo sweet Dinda. thanks for stopping by and good luck on the contest!

Steven Henderson October 30, 2011 at 7:35 AM Your words take me back to my youth. Thanks for sharing Dinda! Steve