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I Sipped Chocolate In Your Kiss

(30/10/2011)

It was my first kiss
Heated by your warm soft lips
Sweets from your lips’ tips

Intertwined desires
I sipped chocolate of your lips
Our blood pumped in whiz

Dinda Minardi
For Michael J. Falotico contest
"Kiss Like a Fruit"

Copyright © Dinda Minardi | Year Posted 2011

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Matthew Anish Date: 12/26/2011 6:48:00 PM Did you win the contest? I like the phrase "choclate of your lips. Peace & love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 12/16/2011 9:12:00 AM A guaranteed way to get more, a nice goal to have when it's the right person. Enjoyed the taste! :) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 11/13/2011 10:00:00 AM Very nice Senryu on kiss.I am a male from India.I think you are a lady/girl.Isn't it? Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/7/2011 6:18:00 AM A belated congratulations I am sending you for your win in Michael's "A Kiss Like Fruit" contest Dinda. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 11/6/2011 6:28:00 AM Lovely romantic piece. Many congrats on all your wins too, Dinda : ) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/6/2011 5:03:00 AM Congrats Dinda on a fantastic win with a chocolate delight so tasty luv...yum Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 11/5/2011 6:51:00 AM Very nice Dinda.Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/4/2011 8:23:00 PM well, who says chocolate cannot be a fruit? Yummy! And congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 11/4/2011 2:59:00 PM Congrats my dear sweet poet friend.... Hey luv we need to collab again... Let me know... love Michael Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 11/3/2011 8:50:00 AM sounds yummy. i bet he'll love this :) Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 11/1/2011 2:44:00 PM This has just got to be a winner Dinda, nice one :) Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 10/30/2011 5:10:00 PM Sounds scrumptious sweetie, can't get enough of this sweet rhyme. All the best in the contest! Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 10/30/2011 4:15:00 PM soo sweet Dinda. thanks for stopping by and good luck on the contest! Login to Reply

Steven Henderson Date: 10/30/2011 7:35:00 AM Your words take me back to my youth. Thanks for sharing Dinda! Steve Login to Reply