Vladislav Raven Poet Free verse

I Sing To You, My Rose

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Oh, Jill, you are my shining rose, 
I sing to you a song of my devotion. 
Oh, passion’s dream, my most beautiful flower, 
I sing to you, my love.

Oh, beauty supreme, you rule my heart, 
your rose does shine within my heart, 
a serenade, each night I sing, 
in honour of a tender rose.

Beloved, now lie by my side, 
teach my heart how it may fly, 
I hold you close, my precious rose. 
To your beauty, I ever sing.

Oh, rose divine, enter my soul, 
love shall flow in passion’s sea, 
Forever, love shall come to be, 
I sing to you, my rose.

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Paul Callus March 23, 2020 at 10:33 AM You remind me of a lovebird singing with romantic passion, Mike. Your words flow freely from the heart. Jill is a lucky lady! Best regards // paul Vladislav Raven March 23, 2020 at 8:01 PM Hi Paul, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I always enjoy writing from the heart. Jill is a beautiful friend. She did like the poems that I wrote for her, in her collection. I always love to let the heart sing. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Richard Lamoureux October 18, 2019 at 7:50 AM Dr. Leo Buscalia wrote. “A single rose can be my garden, one person can be my world,” your poem brought this thought to mind. Vladislav Raven March 23, 2020 at 7:43 PM Hi Richard, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. This is a poem from a series I wrote for a friend. Not in touch with her now but always remembered. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Pandita Sietesantos September 16, 2019 at 12:57 PM My dear friend, this is such a beautiful, romantic piece that would captivate Jill's heart (or the heart of any other woman who felt that it was a love song meant especially for her). Bravo! Love and hugs. Pandita Vladislav Raven October 18, 2019 at 3:18 AM |Hi Pandita, it is wonderful to hear from you. Sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you. A series of poems I have written for my friend. Letting the heart sing as it wishes to do. The poetry is written to sing in the heart. Have a wonderful Friday. Love and |Hugs....Mike. XX

Kim Rodrigues September 12, 2019 at 8:44 PM Pretty! Vladislav Raven October 18, 2019 at 3:05 AM Hi Kim, I am sorry for taking so long to get back to you. Thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Just letting the heart sing for a friend. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jennifer Proxenos September 7, 2019 at 12:57 PM If I could write music , i would put a beautiful tune to this talented write for I been humming it since I read it and it has not left my mind - well penned Mike. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Vladislav Raven September 8, 2019 at 10:19 PM Hi Jennifer, thank you for dropping b y and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I find that sometimes too. I will read something, or write something and then music comes to me, that would fit the words. Strange that. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2019 at 11:49 AM - A beautiful, romantic and sensitive serenade Mike - An ode to unconditional love - An expression of romantic love at its highest level - Best wishes and have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vladislav Raven September 8, 2019 at 10:10 PM Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Still letting the love flow from the heart. I decided to post these poems for I really enjoyed writing them. Sorry it has taken me so long to reply. have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Ann Foster September 6, 2019 at 10:50 AM teach my heart... such sweet words of submission... Excellence in every words, measured and made to give all of its emotions to the reader...A craftsman at work here... Ann Vladislav Raven September 8, 2019 at 10:01 PM Hi Ann, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. My heart shall always sing to the rose. I enjoyed writing this collection of poems so I decided to post them. have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Suzanne Delaney September 5, 2019 at 8:57 PM This is a wonderful song of love,Mike: Makes every heart rejoice. Best, SuZ Vladislav Raven September 8, 2019 at 9:46 PM Hi Suzanne, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Still letting the heart sing as it chooses. I enjoyed writing this collection of poems so I thought I would share them. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

James Marshall Goff September 5, 2019 at 6:51 PM Yes, very romantic Mike, good work! Vladislav Raven September 8, 2019 at 9:36 PM Hi James, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The heart is still singing love. The romance shall ever sing James. have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Richard Lamoureux September 5, 2019 at 9:49 AM Is this a repost Mike? It has a familiar feel. Either way it brings a smile. Vladislav Raven September 8, 2019 at 9:26 PM HI Richard, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated, I am so glad you liked the piece. I can't really say if it is a new or old write. I added some new writes, recently, to the collection. Iy is not unlike another write that I did do on the soup, a while back. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Eve Roper September 4, 2019 at 10:51 PM your words of romance are so beautiful my friend.. Vladislav Raven September 8, 2019 at 9:14 PM Hi Eve, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I still love to let the heart sing as it chooses. I can't quite remember if this is one of my older writes for this collection, or one of the newer. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Connie Marcum Wong September 4, 2019 at 1:13 PM A lovely song for the object of your affections. I hope she appreciates your romantic words of love my friend. Have a great night! : ) xxoo Vladislav Raven September 8, 2019 at 6:37 PM Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The words are appreciated Connie. These are early writes from the collection. I did enjoy writing this one. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison September 3, 2019 at 5:26 PM aww Mike ever the master of romance, Jill certainly is a lucky lady to have such beautiful poems written for her:-) hugs Jan xx Vladislav Raven September 8, 2019 at 4:04 PM Hi Jan, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I think I am the lucky one to have her friendship Jan. She does like the work, that is the main thing. The heart is still singing. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. xx