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I Shuddered

In the dark cold reality, Unflinching vision world totality I quivered at the quaking, Twitching uncontrolled heaves shaking, God's leaving town My heart wobbled just thinking The absence of some believing, To be lost in such frailty Kneeling to give an unholy fealty, Ground sinking down Hell's fires surely are baking Truth is all in the damned faking, Kings crowned in vacant royalty Shudder to think of the loyalty, Shops shutting down Close your shudders!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/18/2012 9:33:00 AM
It surely seems that many things are shutting down these days where so much evil is taking over the way of life as we knew it. A poem with wisdom we should heed Tim.
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Date: 7/9/2012 12:37:00 PM
great spiritual write,with depth,loved it Tim
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Date: 7/9/2012 11:17:00 AM
Interesting work that your have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Your presence at my work was so encouraging..When God removes the Holy Spirit and all true believers, this earth is going to be a terrible place to be for that short seven years..Sara
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:49:00 PM
Very powerful poem, Tim. GREAT ending line too. wow.
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