Tim B Poet Rhyme

I Shuddered

In the dark cold reality,
Unflinching vision world totality
I quivered at the quaking,
Twitching uncontrolled heaves shaking,
God's leaving town

My heart wobbled just thinking
The absence of some believing,
To be lost in such frailty
Kneeling to give an unholy fealty,
Ground sinking down

Hell's fires surely are baking
Truth is all in the damned faking,
Kings crowned in vacant royalty
Shudder to think of the loyalty,
Shops shutting down

Close your shudders!

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Elizabeth Wesley July 18, 2012 at 9:33 AM It surely seems that many things are shutting down these days where so much evil is taking over the way of life as we knew it. A poem with wisdom we should heed Tim.

Richard Palmer July 9, 2012 at 12:37 PM great spiritual write,with depth,loved it Tim

Sara Kendrick July 9, 2012 at 11:17 AM Interesting work that your have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Your presence at my work was so encouraging..When God removes the Holy Spirit and all true believers, this earth is going to be a terrible place to be for that short seven years..Sara

Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2012 at 10:49 PM Very powerful poem, Tim. GREAT ending line too. wow.