Shirley Bracken Poet Free verse

I Shudder

Winter
                                       I feel nothing
                                       your icy kiss
                                      leaves me numb

                                       your raw coat
                                    of shifting winds
                                   leaves me frigid


                                        isolated


                                     in the cold
                                        I shudder.

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Andrea Dietrich August 10, 2010 at 11:39 PM oooh, I like this! Luv, Andrea

Wilma Neels July 18, 2010 at 11:19 AM Wow Shirley, deep write, I love your work.. WNN

Poet Destroyer A July 15, 2010 at 9:16 PM wow, deep write... I like how I can visualize this and then I can also see this in a diferent perspective, enjoyed your write..P.D.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 15, 2010 at 6:41 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shirley. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 14, 2010 at 8:14 PM Very vivid and descriptive.. now there is a free verse contest posted.. u should enter this one .. contests are one way to get your poetry read and if u win.. read even more.. go to the contest page and scroll down till u see FREE VERSE contest by Catie Lindsey.. hit enter contest and your list of poems comes up.. click on Shudder and click enter.. easy.. good luck if u do.. check out the rest of the contests too.. with luv..