I Shouldn'T

Tungs twist, thoughts resist
I wish I could tell you this
Yet silence remains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 11:44 PM
Nice Senryu James, the flow is right on 5-7-5. I hope to see more...Raul
Lopez Avatar
February 19, 2009 at 2:40 PM
good write. thinking of just how to say what we are thinking... this can somtimes be tricky! good job
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February 12, 2009 at 3:09 PM
Interesting perspective. This is thought provoking--I've already read it a few times. Thank you for sharing this senryu with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Karen
Jordan Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 4:57 AM
James a very interesting Senryu - God Bless, MJ
Parish Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 6:05 PM
yep, sometimes it's better to keep silent. wonderful Senryu
Haniff Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 4:11 PM
nice piece of poetry...I can tell u, this I can relate to very well...*/*Maryam
Atanacio Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 5:18 AM
wow-- okay-- I think you should--well written
P. Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 1:32 AM
a good senryu... ~ Arany
Wiggins Avatar
February 9, 2009 at 9:31 PM
Nice piece of work. . .
Gass Avatar
February 9, 2009 at 9:11 PM
Awesome senryu! I can relate to this well. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Love, Robin
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