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I Shouldn'T

Tungs twist, thoughts resist I wish I could tell you this Yet silence remains

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Raul Moreno

Date: 4/7/2009 11:44:00 PM

Nice Senryu James, the flow is right on 5-7-5. I hope to see more...Raul

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/19/2009 2:40:00 PM

good write. thinking of just how to say what we are thinking... this can somtimes be tricky! good job

Date: 2/12/2009 3:09:00 PM

Interesting perspective. This is thought provoking--I've already read it a few times. Thank you for sharing this senryu with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/11/2009 4:57:00 AM

James a very interesting Senryu - God Bless, MJ

Belinda Parish

Date: 2/10/2009 6:05:00 PM

yep, sometimes it's better to keep silent. wonderful Senryu

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 2/10/2009 4:11:00 PM

nice piece of poetry...I can tell u, this I can relate to very well...*/*Maryam

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 2/10/2009 5:18:00 AM

wow-- okay-- I think you should--well written

Arany P.

Date: 2/10/2009 1:32:00 AM

a good senryu... ~ Arany

Breana Wiggins

Date: 2/9/2009 9:31:00 PM

Nice piece of work. . .

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/9/2009 9:11:00 PM

Awesome senryu! I can relate to this well. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Love, Robin