I Shoulda Seen It Comin'

Much has been written about a treacherous heart,
and how it beats with the need for passion's fire.
I was content on my own, without a single thought
of falling in love, but soon I was filled with desire.

He was perfectly charming, saying all the right things
with that masculine timbre of a sultry voice. 
His eyes of ocean blue, pulled at my heart strings
until I fell in love with him. I had no choice.

But there was a niggling worry floating in my mind
that something was off that I couldn't quite define.
He had flaws, but to all of them my heart was blind,
refusing to warn me with a dissuasive sign.

His true character showed when his temper flared
and his verbal abuse caught me by surprise.
He resembled a rabid creature, with teeth bared
and became a snarling stranger before my eyes.

"I shoulda seen it comin," the cliche is a phrase,
that tells the story of hindsight one should've taken.
But a treacherous heart refuses to see and then pays
the price of being wounded, bleeding and broken.


February 2, 2023
I Shoulda Seen It Comin' Contest
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Cunningham Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 11:46 AM
How often we've been caught out with the wolf in sheep's clothing, sadly many find out when it's too late. Good luck Lin, glad to see you're still in town. Tom
Lane Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 11:58 AM
lol Thanks, Tom. I've been assigned the honorable task of keeping Aces and Hank's in good stead, so I'll be hanging around. I appreciate your good luck wishes.
Goff Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 11:01 AM
I believe many share these artfully crafted lines, Lin, good work!
Lane Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 11:17 AM
That's sorrowfully true, James. Thank you for commenting.
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