I Should Have the Sheets Replaced

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Okay, so I was watching the musical Chicago yesterday.

I SHOULD HAVE THE SHEETS REPLACED A wild reckless time in bed. I should have the sheets replaced. The smoke outlasts recoiled lead. Sordid act shot off in haste. I should have the sheets replaced. Toxic smell of blood’s vivid. Sordid act shot off in haste. I can’t believe I’ve lived it. Toxic smell of blood’s vivid. Handcuffs on the one I loved. I can’t believe I’ve lived it. Brought him to the brink and shoved. Handcuffs on the one I loved. The smoke outlasts recoiled lead. Brought him to the brink and shoved. A wild reckless time in bed. 3/23/2018 Laura Loo’s Favorite Pantoum Contest

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Carrie Richards

Date: 3/29/2018 10:13:00 AM

Whahoo !!! Another side of the bed you are sharing !! LOL !!! yes.........time for new sheets, cold showers, and a blood pressure pill !!! haha!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2018 12:19:00 PM

LOL, Carrie! Glad you enjoyed the steamy write!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/24/2018 9:36:00 AM

Whoa! I am not sure I understand exactly what went on in bed but I don't think I would have wanted to be there. Reads like a winner. Nights with Hairy the Chihuahua is bad enough..Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2018 9:47:00 PM

Thanks, Sara! :)