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I Shall Go

I shall go I am writing you with remorseful heart, for the sin that I am yet to offend; the sin I myself mightn’t forgive myself. The sin that ever will live in my heart; I beseech you to make your heart a stone, for this sin of mine is a blazing fire, which murders a heart million million times; my eyes are rains of numberless finger, streams are streaming and ocean is forming, precious heart of yours which is yet to break. You are green, but in the heart you are frail; you are gentle, your kindness is a glue; I have looked to the north, south, east and west, your peers are few, in farther way, in soup. I have to go and your heart I must break, my way I must find for what future holds; I shall do good, I shall fill your cheeks with brilliant smile; I shall go uncle, I shall go...

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Date: 1/24/2017 3:23:00 PM
So profound and deep, and from the heart, beautiful poetry
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Date: 12/8/2016 3:01:00 PM
Emotive and expressive work..Very descriptive using poetic phrasing..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/5/2016 5:41:00 AM
Realizing that someone is a sinner and repenting for it is the first step to forgiveness! A very powerful and emotional poem dear, A.M.! Very well written!
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Date: 12/1/2016 8:09:00 AM
Hi AM, You have penned such a well written declaration. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/30/2016 8:48:00 AM
Brother if you have to go to loss free so let it be so powerful words here richard Nnoli
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Date: 11/30/2016 5:24:00 AM
Very Intresting Poem I Love It
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Date: 11/29/2016 2:51:00 AM
Excellent declaration my friend. All your sins can be forgiven. Well done.
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Date: 11/24/2016 1:26:00 PM
Such a sincere declaration, Afolabi. How can sins not be forgiven when one expresses himself in this way! Well done! // paul
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Date: 11/21/2016 6:14:00 PM
Beautiful
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/1/2016 12:44:00 AM
thank you for the comment.

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