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Author's Notes: This poem, entitled: "I Shall Feel Your Touch Always" is an "Epiphora" style poem. "Epiphora" (aka: "Epistrophe") is known as the counterpart of the "Anaphora." Whereas the Anaphora style is noted for a repetition of the same word or words at the beginning of a series of phrases, lines, or sentences; the Epiphora, in contrast, consists of the repetition of a same word or phrase (or even a sentence) at the end of successive clauses, sentences, or lines, that is "verses." Following the Epiphora schema, I pursued the theme of my current poem here with the ending repetitive romantic refrain: "I Shall Feel Your Touch Always," which just happens to be the title of this poem too. I used the powerful, evocative repetition technique of this exclamatory sentence at the end of each verse in the poem to highlight the romantic words and message of each verse in the poem to the reader. I did this so the reader could see, sense, and feel the cumulative effect that each succeeding repetition had in amplifying the overall meaning of this poem. This particular poetic style has been used on occasion by famous past poets, to include Walt Whitman, Elizabeth Barrett Browning, and Robert Frost. As with the Anaphora style, the Epiphora's emphatic expressive magic comes from the veritable precision and repetition of the chosen repetitive refrain, which through a collective resonance and tonal syncopation enhances the overall power and meaning of the poem and its theme.  In this case, that theme being a continued message hope, passion, trust, commitment, and togetherness between a couple who are in love. With all of that -- please enjoy this poem!! (Gary Bateman - November 12, 2015) (Epiphora)

Categories:  allegory, emotions, feelings, god, love, passion, and romance. 

I Shall Feel Your Touch Always Whenever I think of you my dearest one regardless of the time of the day, I sometimes lose myself in moments of deepest introspection, but I know and realize that “I Shall Feel Your Touch Always.” With the divine clouds in Heaven above itself, I shall feel your touch always! When I dream of you so deeply during the night, I shall feel your touch always! With the warm sweet winds of Summer kissing our faces, I shall feel your touch always! When we walk together closely now hand in hand, I shall feel your touch always! By the beauty of a most radiant starlit night, I shall feel your touch always! As we walk in the shadow and smile of the Full Moon, I shall feel your touch always! As I look passionately into your most loving eyes, I shall feel your touch always! With the gentle cool breeze of a fresh Spring morning, I shall feel your touch always! When I think of your special smile and funny presence, I shall feel your touch always! After a soft rain as a magical color-arrayed Rainbow appears, I shall feel your touch always! As the cool-warm wind of Autumn caresses our very souls, I shall feel your touch always! When I hear the mellifluous voices of Angels in my dream world, I shall feel your touch always! As we walk in the fresh-frozen wonder of a bright Winter morning, I shall feel your touch always! When our earthly presence ends and we walk on footpaths to eternity, I shall feel your touch always! As we one day stand before God in Heaven after our final ascent, I shall feel your touch always! As I declare my eternal love to you forever my dearest one, I shall feel your touch always! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, November 12, 2015 (Epiphora)

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Date: 11/16/2015 3:02:00 PM
it flows through the quill of an angel write
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/17/2015 7:13:00 PM
Thanks Liam Mate!! The Leprechauns did indeed help me with this one!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Date: 11/14/2015 7:44:00 PM
total romance of eternal love! LOVELY!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/15/2015 12:19:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!! I really appreciate your comment here. Total Romance of Eternal Love is a very compelling theme. And I wanted you to know that I also really like all the things you are doing with SKAT, Linda, and others in helping new poets as they come into the Community. I know that I try to mentor as I can too. This makes for a vital community of poets who are writing great poetry and getting better day by day!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 11/13/2015 11:31:00 PM
For me this is simply a great and beautiful Love poem!!!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/14/2015 3:30:00 AM
Thanks so much Arthur!! I too liked the way this Epiphora worked. It communicated this message of "Love" so well. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 11/12/2015 4:23:00 AM
Mein guter freund es ist virklich wunderbar! A masterpiece of a poem that unites the temporal with the eternal in a unique way! A sever dear Gary is the least I can do!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/12/2015 10:35:00 AM
Hallo Herr Professor!! Ich bedanke hier sehr fuer deinen Kommentar!! I did enjoy doing the Epiphora for sure. I really like too your mention of the unity of the "temporal and the "eternal." You are, indeed, quite perceptive Sir!! Thanks for the "Seven" too. Cheers and Best, Gary
Date: 11/12/2015 4:12:00 AM
Hi Gary, I'm glad I stopped by to view this piece. It's so beautiful and romantic. I enjoyed the form and the message. You write poems of "love" and "God" so eloquently. As always when I read your work it's as though I went to class and learned about "love". Thanks for sharing this seven piece. It's most definitely a fav. :-)Alexis
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/12/2015 10:19:00 AM
Hello Alexis!! Your are indeed quite astute in your analysis here. The "Author's Notes" that I take time to write on each of my poems are there to answer any questions the reader might have, and they tend to prepare the reader for actually delving into the poem. You got it right . . . the "Love" and "God" themes are important to me in a number of my writes, depending on the theme. Thanks so much for the "7" and the "FAV." I'm very pleased you liked this poem!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Date: 11/12/2015 3:22:00 AM
Hi G! A very beautiful, romantic, sweet love piece you've painted here, with this poem, my dear friend Gary.A very wonderful love poem filled of so much love and devotion.Just beautifully written!Excellent in content and in this form,G.Just awesome!Ingrid must love it.This is so cool and it remind me a lot of the Anaphora style, but this one has the repeats at the end:)I truly enjoyed it!Golden pen!A 7 +! A fav!Very nice to see you back in the soup today and posting again, G.I really hope that all is well with you these days.Sending love n' prayers to you and Ingrid as always:))Take good care of each other now:)All the best to you too always, G! And just keep the ink flowing!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light! God bless you always!:)D.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/12/2015 10:30:00 AM
Hello Dear One "D" -- Thanks as always for your great comments and the "7" + "FAV"!! You were the one who actually influenced me first to write my earlier "Anaphora" poem ("The Power of Love") on 2 Nov 15. This "Epiphora" style is, of course, the reverse of the Anaphora with the repeating phrase or sentence coming at the end. I'm very pleased that you liked this write. (I've started to experiment more with other styles over time.) Again, I end up at times getting ideas from some of the styles you use with your poetry -- and from other academic sources outside of Poetry Soup. And so, I do read your poetry too whenever I can make it by to do so!! I like the variability of the Anaphora and Epiphora styles for sure!! Best Wishes for the upcoming weekend Dear "D" -- Cheers, "G"

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