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I See You In My Dreams

Are you a figment of my imagination or are you for real Do you dream like me and feel the things I feel My head hits the pillow is it your face that I see I wonder if I’m in your dreams and how you see me I hear your voice around me can’t get you out of my head Wonder if you dream of me or someone else instead Lie there dreaming of the things we’d do and say Then realise the alarm is ringing and it’s the start of a brand new day Jan Allison 18th April 2014 - 8th place in Poetry Destroyer A contest Any poem #25 -

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Alexis Y.

Date: 11/4/2015 6:29:00 PM

Jan, I really enjoyed this piece. I will always believe in dreams . Because they do come true. I'm making this A fav:-) Alexis 7

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/6/2015 3:12:00 PM

I will go read it:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 11/6/2015 3:05:00 PM

There is a follow up on jadazzle united where we wrote dreams from the mans and woman's point of view:-) hugs jan xx

Robin Davis

Date: 5/18/2014 11:00:00 PM

Jan Such a sweet and charming write. The passion and dreaminess of love is nicely displayed. Thank you for the great comment on my Birthday poem post

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2014 1:13:00 AM

do check out jadazzle united - Darren and I have continued this poem with letters to each other- its all fantasy by the way :-) Jan xxxx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2014 1:12:00 AM

thanks for dropping by as ever Robin. hugs Jan xxx

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/8/2014 9:55:00 AM

Wonderful presentation Jan! I have had such dreams myself. Married to one now!! We found we dreamed the same melody, same love and same future.. always a true blessing...

Jan Allison
Date: 5/8/2014 11:26:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comments Robert. Hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/27/2014 11:07:00 PM

Congratulations on the fine win with this lovely write, jan

Jan Allison
Date: 4/28/2014 1:01:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Dr Mehta. Hugs Jan x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2014 2:40:00 PM

Hello, Jan, thank you for the entry, and comment on my blog... Linda

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2014 2:55:00 PM

My pleasure Linda. i hope one day to expand this poem as people seem to like its sentiment. Hugs Jan x

J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/22/2014 6:35:00 AM

Dazzling write here. Romantic much? :) I absolutely adore these poems. nicely written...you are my fav poet on here. :) You earned it! I have moments like these...I can't deny! -DWB

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2014 6:53:00 AM

Wow that sure is one awesome comment David I am truly flattered. Do check out my collaboration poems with Darren Watson for more romantic writes. Only joined here in Feb having the Time of my life. Hugs Jan x No idea where this came from its not my usual style

Paddi March

Date: 4/21/2014 5:00:00 PM

A very sweet love poem. It has a beautiful clarity. I have never written in verse. except one sonnet. but now I think I will try.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2014 5:18:00 PM

Thanks Paddi - its a total deviation from my normal poems - was listening to romantic music and it appeared from nowhere. Hugs Jan x

Vera Duggan

Date: 4/19/2014 8:16:00 PM

Love that one Jan as I do most of your writes. Love to you and Bob.............Vera...........

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2014 8:38:00 PM

Thanks Vera. Not like me to go with a romantic verse this one appeared out of no-where. Happy Easter to you and Peter. Hugs Jan xxxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/19/2014 12:12:00 PM

I hope your sweetheart comes home and makes this dream a reality.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2014 8:39:00 PM

His birthday isn't until November Richard LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/19/2014 7:08:00 PM

A bit of fantasy can start the home fires a burning. Make your husband's fantasy come alive and you will be the benefactor. Us men love surprises.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2014 6:40:00 PM

Oh Richard, its purely a dream - don't think my hubby would be too impressed if I had a sweetheart. Then again in my dreams if hes tall with greying hair I may not tell hubby lol- see my poem 'pleaseeee don't reach for the just for men' lol Hugs and Happy Easter Jan xxx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/18/2014 11:41:00 PM

A lovely dream to wake up to Jan. This poem just rolls off the tongue so smoothly.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2014 2:24:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comments Connie - the irony is I find it so hard to sleep at the moment. LOL Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/18/2014 8:26:00 PM

What a glorious dream..I love having those..hugs Tim "their" should be "there"

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2014 2:14:00 AM

thanks Tim - ops my 'smell chequer' let me down. Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 4/18/2014 6:54:00 PM

That was a nice flow of words Jan :) Ana

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2014 2:12:00 AM

Thanks Ana Hugs Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2014 3:44:00 PM

- Continue to dream your beautiful dreams, Jan - (but. .. tell them to me :) - Throw the alarm clock. - oxox // Anne-Lise :))

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2014 3:49:00 PM

Was listening to romantic songs and this just appeared from nowhere - yes good idea Anne Lise will ditch the alarm and keep on dreaming of tall men with greying hair mmmmmmmmm lol hugs Jan xxxx