Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

I See You In My Dreams

Are you a figment of my imagination or are you for real
Do you dream like me and feel the things I feel
My head hits the pillow is it your face that I see
I wonder if I’m in your dreams and how you see me

I hear your voice around me can’t get you out of my head
Wonder if you dream of me or someone else instead
Lie there dreaming of the things we’d do and say
Then realise the alarm is ringing and it’s the start of a brand new day

Jan Allison
18th April 2014

 - 8th place in Poetry Destroyer A contest Any poem #25 -

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Alexis Y. November 4, 2015 at 6:29 PM Jan, I really enjoyed this piece. I will always believe in dreams . Because they do come true. I'm making this A fav:-) Alexis 7 Alexis Y. November 6, 2015 at 3:12 PM I will go read it:-) Alexis Jan Allison November 6, 2015 at 3:05 PM There is a follow up on jadazzle united where we wrote dreams from the mans and woman's point of view:-) hugs jan xx

Robin Davis May 18, 2014 at 11:00 PM Jan Such a sweet and charming write. The passion and dreaminess of love is nicely displayed. Thank you for the great comment on my Birthday poem post Jan Allison May 19, 2014 at 1:13 AM do check out jadazzle united - Darren and I have continued this poem with letters to each other- its all fantasy by the way :-) Jan xxxx Jan Allison May 19, 2014 at 1:12 AM thanks for dropping by as ever Robin. hugs Jan xxx

Robert Lindley May 8, 2014 at 9:55 AM Wonderful presentation Jan! I have had such dreams myself. Married to one now!! We found we dreamed the same melody, same love and same future.. always a true blessing... Jan Allison May 8, 2014 at 11:26 AM Thanks for the lovely comments Robert. Hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta April 27, 2014 at 11:07 PM Congratulations on the fine win with this lovely write, jan Jan Allison April 28, 2014 at 1:01 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Dr Mehta. Hugs Jan x

Poet Destroyer A April 27, 2014 at 2:40 PM Hello, Jan, thank you for the entry, and comment on my blog... Linda Jan Allison April 27, 2014 at 2:55 PM My pleasure Linda. i hope one day to expand this poem as people seem to like its sentiment. Hugs Jan x

David William Breidenthal April 22, 2014 at 6:35 AM Dazzling write here. Romantic much? :) I absolutely adore these poems. nicely written...you are my fav poet on here. :) You earned it! I have moments like these...I can't deny! -DWB Jan Allison April 22, 2014 at 6:53 AM Wow that sure is one awesome comment David I am truly flattered. Do check out my collaboration poems with Darren Watson for more romantic writes. Only joined here in Feb having the Time of my life. Hugs Jan x No idea where this came from its not my usual style

Paddi March April 21, 2014 at 5:00 PM A very sweet love poem. It has a beautiful clarity. I have never written in verse. except one sonnet. but now I think I will try. Jan Allison April 21, 2014 at 5:18 PM Thanks Paddi - its a total deviation from my normal poems - was listening to romantic music and it appeared from nowhere. Hugs Jan x

Vera Duggan April 19, 2014 at 8:16 PM Love that one Jan as I do most of your writes. Love to you and Bob.............Vera........... Jan Allison April 19, 2014 at 8:38 PM Thanks Vera. Not like me to go with a romantic verse this one appeared out of no-where. Happy Easter to you and Peter. Hugs Jan xxxx

Richard Lamoureux April 19, 2014 at 12:12 PM I hope your sweetheart comes home and makes this dream a reality. Jan Allison April 19, 2014 at 8:39 PM His birthday isn't until November Richard LOL Hugs Jan xxx Richard Lamoureux April 19, 2014 at 7:08 PM A bit of fantasy can start the home fires a burning. Make your husband's fantasy come alive and you will be the benefactor. Us men love surprises. Jan Allison April 19, 2014 at 6:40 PM Oh Richard, its purely a dream - don't think my hubby would be too impressed if I had a sweetheart. Then again in my dreams if hes tall with greying hair I may not tell hubby lol- see my poem 'pleaseeee don't reach for the just for men' lol Hugs and Happy Easter Jan xxx

Connie Marcum Wong April 18, 2014 at 11:41 PM A lovely dream to wake up to Jan. This poem just rolls off the tongue so smoothly. Jan Allison April 19, 2014 at 2:24 AM Thanks for the lovely comments Connie - the irony is I find it so hard to sleep at the moment. LOL Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith April 18, 2014 at 8:26 PM What a glorious dream..I love having those..hugs Tim "their" should be "there" Jan Allison April 19, 2014 at 2:14 AM thanks Tim - ops my 'smell chequer' let me down. Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Ana Espinola Collins April 18, 2014 at 6:54 PM That was a nice flow of words Jan :) Ana Jan Allison April 19, 2014 at 2:12 AM Thanks Ana Hugs Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2014 at 3:44 PM - Continue to dream your beautiful dreams, Jan - (but. .. tell them to me :) - Throw the alarm clock. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)) Jan Allison April 18, 2014 at 3:49 PM Was listening to romantic songs and this just appeared from nowhere - yes good idea Anne Lise will ditch the alarm and keep on dreaming of tall men with greying hair mmmmmmmmm lol hugs Jan xxxx