I See You I See Me

I see you, I see me.
I see the us we use to be.
Your music, my writing.
We saw the future in each others eyes.
A band for you, a novel for me.
My soul mate so I thought.
But what it was, was magic.
A true friendship I would see
when I looked in your eyes
from that moment on.
A kiss so tender only a friend could provide.
Ravishing energy beamed from you when you played.
A glow like never seen before as I put into words
I see you I see me.
I see the us we've become today.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Jackson Avatar
July 25, 2008 at 1:25 PM
This was really beautiful. I see u at poetry soup and I'm glad your here. Keep writing congrats.
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July 22, 2008 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Caroline. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
July 21, 2008 at 11:41 AM
Very beautiful poem - As love grows it gains strength and beauty - congrats on the feature
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July 21, 2008 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations Caroline on being featured this week with "I See You I See Me." Vince
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July 20, 2008 at 6:49 PM
What an uplifting piece. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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July 20, 2008 at 5:55 PM
Congratulations Caroline on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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