I See You, Flowers In Your Raven Hair

I See You, Flowers In Your Raven Hair

I see you, in flowery meadow scenes
walking, your blue dress swaying in the wind
your raven hair, beautiful stuff of dreams
and promise, deepest love that never ends.

You see me, with my old pen scribbling so slow
words that poetry absorbs with loud bells
echoing soft tunes shot from heart's love-bow
birthing sheer joy as the oracle tells.

I see you, flowers in your raven hair
coming back, your delicious smile beaming
saying, yes dearest love, I truly care
Fate has decreed our eternal teaming.

You see me, with my old pen scribbling so slow.
Echoing soft tunes shot from heart's love-bow.

Robert J. Lindley, 6-25-2019
Sonnet, ( Where Dream Waves Meet Love's Welcoming Shores)

Note: 
Found a moment pen called to dare,
walk from deep dark into that brighter light,
wake again this soul, to its past love bare,
in poetic truth, this life try to repair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 8/22/2019 2:30:00 PM
I love this one, Robert:It reminds me of a wonderful couple I know. You have a truly romantic soul. Love, SuZ
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Date: 7/6/2019 4:59:00 PM
I like your dark ones but am so fond of your brighter side.How beautiful this is Robert.
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Date: 7/4/2019 10:16:00 AM
So beautiful, Robert! The pen might be old, but the poetry is as fresh as ever! keep up the good work...and yes, a fav for me too, my friend! Regards // paul
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Date: 6/30/2019 1:43:00 PM
This is gorgeous, Robert. Gotta fave it.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/30/2019 5:21:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. Your kindness and comments are truly appreciated.
Date: 6/28/2019 6:59:00 PM
Beautiful in every way my dear friend. Your thoughts touch my heart. The last two lines leave me in awe. Especially this: "You see me, with my old pen scribbling so slow" True Love waits! I shall place this in my favorites, to read again. :) Brandy
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/30/2019 5:20:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. Your kindness and comments are truly appreciated.
Date: 6/28/2019 1:19:00 AM
Hi Robert, Hope you win FIRSt place. How wonderful you are with a pen and with life! Humbly, Panagiots
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/30/2019 5:20:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. Your kindness and comments are truly appreciated.
Date: 6/27/2019 6:25:00 PM
Very nice. I enjoyed reading your poems. I read 3 of them (I have a short attention span.). ;)
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Date: 6/27/2019 6:23:00 PM
Very nicely done. I enjoyed your poems. I read 3 of them. (I have a shot attention span.). ;)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/30/2019 5:19:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. Your kindness and comments are truly appreciated.
Date: 6/27/2019 1:07:00 PM
I love your raven old pen, Robert. It bleeds to breath.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/30/2019 5:19:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. Your kindness and comments are truly appreciated.
Date: 6/26/2019 2:42:00 PM
Mr Poetry...another beautiful write...that old pen just keeps on writing... Well done Robert
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/27/2019 11:57:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend. Your kindness and comments are truly appreciated.
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