I See You

I see YOU,
Dark hair,
All teasing smiles,
Simple beauty,
You stole my heart,
I never had a chance,
Against the beauty that is you.


*2nd in "simply beautiful" contest*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 12, 2015 at 2:50 AM
Amelia, congratulations on your beautiful win... HUGS ~LINDA~
Yvonne Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 8:34 PM
Congratulations on both your wins! First love is euphoric! Winning a poetry contest isn't too bad either!
Deschler Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 7:13 PM
A very lovely poem, Amelia! I know this feeling and it is a moment not to be forgotten... Congrats on your win!
Allison Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 5:37 PM
beautifully penned Amelia - sounds like someone sure caught your eye! :-) hugs Jan xx
Harmon Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 11:03 PM
Always... First love is by far the most memorable.
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