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I See You

I see YOU, Dark hair, All teasing smiles, Simple beauty, You stole my heart, I never had a chance, Against the beauty that is you. *2nd in "simply beautiful" contest*

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2015 2:50:00 AM

Amelia, congratulations on your beautiful win... HUGS ~LINDA~

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/5/2015 8:34:00 PM

Congratulations on both your wins! First love is euphoric! Winning a poetry contest isn't too bad either!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/5/2015 7:13:00 PM

A very lovely poem, Amelia! I know this feeling and it is a moment not to be forgotten... Congrats on your win!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2015 5:37:00 PM

beautifully penned Amelia - sounds like someone sure caught your eye! :-) hugs Jan xx

Amelia Harmon
Date: 4/2/2015 11:03:00 PM

Always... First love is by far the most memorable.