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I See You

When I awake My thoughts encumbered I see you there As I sit in my favorite spot drinking my favorite tea I see you there Then before work I do the every day things one does before I take my leave I reach for my keys I see you there The worlds beauty around me No voice do I hear No words he shares He is nobody nowhere and yet I see you there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/6/2019 4:42:00 AM
beautiful; really really a beautiful pome, love it
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Date: 11/13/2010 7:33:00 PM
I see you, have a gift! Truly a beautiful piece of poetry. The emotion spoke to me, Great work!
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Date: 11/13/2010 6:27:00 PM
A sadness flows in your words Sharon >> James :)
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Date: 11/12/2010 8:02:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem of someone once loved? I must caution; be careful with spelling. The third verse in the last stanza. "No words does he share" I am confused with "doe's" Sorry, an instructor never seems to rest. Also it is nobody and nowhere, unless you are playing with the words.
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Date: 11/10/2010 9:55:00 AM
Hey Sharon, awesome write, out of sight but not out of mind. You said it all in this beautiful piece ;)
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:04:00 PM
I can definitely relate to this one. I love this write it's great!
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Date: 11/9/2010 4:00:00 PM
beautiful write, touching with words that melt...love Michael
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Date: 11/9/2010 1:40:00 PM
enjoyed reading your work... sounds like a good day!
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