Sharon Ruebel Poet Prose Poetry

I See You

When I awake  
My thoughts encumbered
I see you there 

As I sit in my favorite spot
drinking my favorite tea
I see you there 

Then before work
I do the every day things
one does before I take my leave
I reach for my keys
I see you there

The worlds beauty around me
No voice do I hear
No words he shares
He is nobody nowhere
and yet
I see you there

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Mahtab Bangalee March 6, 2019 at 4:42 AM beautiful; really really a beautiful pome, love it

Audonus Taylor November 13, 2010 at 7:33 PM I see you, have a gift! Truly a beautiful piece of poetry. The emotion spoke to me, Great work!

James Fraser November 13, 2010 at 6:27 PM A sadness flows in your words Sharon >> James :)

Jancarl Campi November 12, 2010 at 8:02 AM This is a beautiful poem of someone once loved? I must caution; be careful with spelling. The third verse in the last stanza. "No words does he share" I am confused with "doe's" Sorry, an instructor never seems to rest. Also it is nobody and nowhere, unless you are playing with the words.

Wilma Neels November 10, 2010 at 9:55 AM Hey Sharon, awesome write, out of sight but not out of mind. You said it all in this beautiful piece ;)

Nicole Sharon Brown November 9, 2010 at 7:04 PM I can definitely relate to this one. I love this write it's great!

Michael J. Falotico November 9, 2010 at 4:00 PM beautiful write, touching with words that melt...love Michael

Doris Culverhouse November 9, 2010 at 1:40 PM enjoyed reading your work... sounds like a good day!