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Bite Size Conest no109 Poetry Contest

4/29/25

Sponsored by Line Gauthier

I see you, lurking at the edge of the crowd with your eyes down and head hanging When I do meet your eyes, I feel the impact of the pain that I see there It feels inadquate, but I offer a smile and a prayer and hope that you can see that I care

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Date: 4/29/2025 2:20:00 PM
Well written Kathleen. Nice to do something even if it is small to boost them up. Good luck
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 5/3/2025 6:27:00 AM
Thanks, Oliver. I think it's easier to spot someone in pain, when you have been there.

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