Richard Lamoureux Poet Quatrain

I See Undoubtable Beauty

Why do women doubt
What seems so easy for us to see
We might have arms like branches
Yet women are the roots of the tree
All of natures forces
Within their soul's does reside
Love for the generations
On their strength us children have relied

So I will shout it from the rooftops
I have known mother, sister and wife
They are the very best part of my being
The givers and keepers of life
Opinions both strong and gentle
Yet each one of them is plagued by doubt 
I guess that's why I'm left to wonder
What in the world are those thoughts all about?

So I reach to them with my very essence
Willing to absorb a small bit of their pain
In hopes that they can see more clearly
And love themselves without any restrain 
I know they think mostly of others
In the end that's who they truly are
It's that combination of doubt strength and beauty
That makes each one of them more lovely by far

In the end all I can do is be thankful
Enjoy each one as they're wonderously made
There resides in each one a special sparkle
A true beauty that never can fade
To me they are comprised of music
A blessing through all of my days
Women and all of their mysteries
gifted to us from Ancient of Days!

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Red Fiery March 6, 2016 at 7:30 PM such a wonderful tribute to all the women...i would say they are lucky ! And I am lucky to read this poem and post my comments...7/7 Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2016 at 7:35 PM Thanks Red! Hugs Rick.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 10, 2015 at 9:28 AM a sweet tribute to women..thank you friend..stay blessed... Richard Lamoureux January 23, 2016 at 6:18 PM Sorry I missed this thoughtful comment till now. Also thanks for the blessing.

Paul Callus October 11, 2015 at 5:13 PM An excellent tribute to the women who played and still play an important part in our lives, Richard. #7 // paul Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2015 at 8:55 AM Thanks Paul.:0)

Monterey Sirak October 11, 2015 at 6:17 AM A beautiful tribute to women everywhere. Thank you. Richard Lamoureux October 11, 2015 at 9:40 AM Thanks and a big hug Monterey!

Kp Nunez October 8, 2015 at 12:28 AM Beautiful. Such an affirming write, Rick! Richard Lamoureux October 8, 2015 at 7:50 AM Thanks Kim.

Michael Tor October 7, 2015 at 6:46 PM Richard they are recognized for how special and unique they are to you. I am sure they feel so blessed to be part of your love for them. Beautiful write honoring your sis, mom, and wife. Richard Lamoureux October 7, 2015 at 6:56 PM Thanks Michael, I have been very fortunate to have wonderful women in my life including friends. Michael Tor October 7, 2015 at 6:47 PM And all other special woman.

Emile Pinet October 7, 2015 at 2:51 PM This is a cheerful descriptive poem filled with respect, that carries a happy beat, praising women and their virtues. Very well written. Emile. Richard Lamoureux October 7, 2015 at 5:53 PM Thanks Emile.

Mama Bear October 7, 2015 at 11:31 AM As a woman, mother, wife and friend of everyone we as women thank you for seeing us as we are Know you are loved. Know also that it is a terrific poem. Am very proud of you Love Mom Richard Lamoureux October 7, 2015 at 12:15 PM You my favourite one are greatly loved. You are the foundation upon which my heart had been formed.