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I See the Sun

ooh i see the sun shine of melting trees, the oak’s innards warmed by soak saturated with the rain and rapturous melody 1/23/2023

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Date: 2/27/2023 7:43:00 PM
Ahh 45 degrees in a Minnesota January memories of just last week lol then 20 inches of snow the next day :) Very fun and engaging loved it! Warmly A.S.
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Date: 2/27/2023 11:57:00 AM
Lovely!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2023 1:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paige!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2023 1:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paige!
Date: 1/23/2023 1:28:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this Tanka with stunning imagery, Kim. The warm sun is a great relief for the natural world during the cold season.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2023 7:42:00 AM
For sure! Thank you!
Date: 1/23/2023 9:35:00 AM
Great imagery, dear Kim. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2023 7:42:00 AM
Thanks, sweet Victor!
Date: 1/23/2023 8:08:00 AM
Some winter days the sun is out and it feel good. Enjoyed this one. Have a blessed day................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2023 9:13:00 AM
Even a scintilla of sun brightens our day! Thank you, my friend!

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