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I See the Sun

ooh i see the sun
shine of melting trees, the oak’s
innards warmed by soak
saturated with the rain
and rapturous melody

1/23/2023

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2023

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Anonomus Scorpio

February 27, 2023 at 7:43 PM

Ahh 45 degrees in a Minnesota January memories of just last week lol then 20 inches of snow the next day :) Very fun and engaging loved it! Warmly A.S.

February 27, 2023 at 11:57 AM

Lovely!

February 27, 2023 at 1:57 PM

Thank you so much, Paige!

February 27, 2023 at 1:55 PM

Thank you so much, Paige!

January 23, 2023 at 1:28 PM

Enjoyed reading this Tanka with stunning imagery, Kim. The warm sun is a great relief for the natural world during the cold season.

January 24, 2023 at 7:42 AM

For sure! Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar

January 23, 2023 at 9:35 AM

Great imagery, dear Kim. Hugs.

January 24, 2023 at 7:42 AM

Thanks, sweet Victor!

Paula Goldsmith

January 23, 2023 at 8:08 AM

Some winter days the sun is out and it feel good. Enjoyed this one. Have a blessed day................

January 23, 2023 at 9:13 AM

Even a scintilla of sun brightens our day! Thank you, my friend!

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