I See the Nature Within



I see mountains and fountains – all within
Mountains of grief too have the snow-capped peaks
And hopes always rise like the dawn’s light – thin;
As in dense forest you would find some creeks

I see rivers and islands – all within
Islands of desolation are plenty
The rivers of life, still flow in between
The sailor smiles and enjoys frumenty

I see valleys and alleys – all within
Valleys of love are there to reconcile
Leaving the dark narrow alleys of sin
Journey begins towards the happy aisle

I see thunders and wonders – in your lips
Come what may, from there, honey fairly drips


24.11.2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/27/2016 2:13:00 AM
The rhythm and rhyme resonates in this poem resonates so beautifully. Congrats, Anindya!
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 11/27/2016 3:51:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Tamal. Warm regards, Bobby
Date: 11/26/2016 3:21:00 PM
Anindya, I loved your amorous poem it had a wonderful flow, rhyme, and syllable count.Thank you so very much for participating in my Sonnet contest . hugs Eve
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 11/26/2016 8:30:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Eve. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 11/25/2016 5:54:00 PM
Congrats on a BIG win, great poem.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 11/25/2016 9:05:00 PM
Thanks Phil...
Date: 11/24/2016 5:12:00 AM
nice poetic lines ... a sonnet to read and like ...
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 11/24/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thank you, Sir. Warm regards, Bobby
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