I See the Light

I see the light
Shining so damn bright
In your eyes
Is where my happiness lies
Bringing me smiles
From far away miles
I wish you weren’t so far
It feels further than earth to mars
But it’s nothing we can’t handle
Because our love is the everlasting flame of a candle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 14, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Kaitlyn Avery, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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July 7, 2015 at 7:49 AM
This is so very beautifully romantic, Kaityln, it touched my heart! I rate it a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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