I See the Light

A sliver of moon
Glows above the Red Planet
This cloudless spring night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Delacroix Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 9:14 PM
A nice imagery with this well written Haiku. Somehow it reminds me of desktop pictures on computer. Isn't there one like that? :) Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.
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April 23, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Luv this Tim ..very visual .. and I agree with u about the allowance of more entries however now having been a sponsor myself for 4 contests it gets a little crazy when judging time comes round.. and they do fill up quickly... so keep trying as I have entered all Raul's contests but the last four have struck out... so lets encourage each other and keep the creative juices flowing.. luv.. "Sweetheart" ...
Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 11:14 AM
Great Haiku almost like being there.. Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work about the tree frogs...Sara
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April 23, 2010 at 3:41 AM
Lovely Haiku, Tim! Thank you for commenting Abendstille (German version) and Evening Symphony! Enjoyed reading your Haiku. Have a nice weekend...Gert
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April 22, 2010 at 7:06 PM
wonderful haiku :) love it! ------Ell
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April 21, 2010 at 7:36 PM
Beautiful imagery you created in this lovely Haiku. Thanks for your comment on my Ekphrasis. It's true. I cannot forget where I come from...I don't want to forget because if I ever do I'll forget who I am.
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April 20, 2010 at 4:30 PM
Wonderful use of imagery. I like the peaceful feel of your words. Keep up the good writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 12:10 PM
Good one, tim. WAs this something you recently witnessed? I never can keep up on all the things that are supposed to be going on in the sky!! LUv, andrea
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April 19, 2010 at 6:39 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Tim. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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April 18, 2010 at 8:37 PM
I can see it from the front porch...beautifully written. BG
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 8:16 PM
A wonderful vision of the sky in this lovely haiku Tim. Aloha, Connie
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April 18, 2010 at 6:33 PM
Brilliant imagery, Tim. Mars is one of the brightest lights in the sky, but we ladies are more drawn to Venus. LOL Great haiku! Love, Carolyn
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April 18, 2010 at 5:11 PM
I love this kind of Spring night ,Tim,,great Haiku..Charma
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April 18, 2010 at 4:01 PM
enjoyed reading this haiku :) keep up the good work ..gives a nice visual picture of a spring night ..keep up the good work ..marco
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April 18, 2010 at 3:45 PM
Nice one have a good one, P.D.
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