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I See the Light

A sliver of moon Glows above the Red Planet This cloudless spring night

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/1/2010 9:14:00 PM

A nice imagery with this well written Haiku. Somehow it reminds me of desktop pictures on computer. Isn't there one like that? :) Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/23/2010 3:12:00 PM

Luv this Tim ..very visual .. and I agree with u about the allowance of more entries however now having been a sponsor myself for 4 contests it gets a little crazy when judging time comes round.. and they do fill up quickly... so keep trying as I have entered all Raul's contests but the last four have struck out... so lets encourage each other and keep the creative juices flowing.. luv.. "Sweetheart" ...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/23/2010 11:14:00 AM

Great Haiku almost like being there.. Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work about the tree frogs...Sara

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/23/2010 3:41:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, Tim! Thank you for commenting Abendstille (German version) and Evening Symphony! Enjoyed reading your Haiku. Have a nice weekend...Gert

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 4/22/2010 7:06:00 PM

wonderful haiku :) love it! ------Ell

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/21/2010 7:36:00 PM

Beautiful imagery you created in this lovely Haiku. Thanks for your comment on my Ekphrasis. It's true. I cannot forget where I come from...I don't want to forget because if I ever do I'll forget who I am.

Date: 4/20/2010 4:30:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery. I like the peaceful feel of your words. Keep up the good writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2010 12:10:00 PM

Good one, tim. WAs this something you recently witnessed? I never can keep up on all the things that are supposed to be going on in the sky!! LUv, andrea