Tim Ryerson Poet Haiku

I See the Earth Move

watching a sunset
on the beach at the ocean
touching the skyline

one quarter, one half
bright, blazing red-orange clouds
our star slowly sinks

I am observing
mighty Mother Earth spinning
my mind blows gently...

*For the Sunset contest sonsored by Nayda Ivette Negron

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Hansteven Selfa December 27, 2015 at 2:06 AM Beautiful :)

Kim Merryman November 26, 2015 at 7:05 PM A picturesque trio of haiku! Congrats on your win, Tim! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich November 24, 2015 at 10:09 AM Tim, I really love the last one there. GREAT KU!! Leaving for Iowa this afternoon. Much to do and trying to catch up here first. I'll miss it. Have a fun thanksgiving.

Skat A November 24, 2015 at 4:12 AM WOW, you blew my mind Tim, CONGRATS! On your sweet SunSet win. LOVE SKAT

Eve Roper November 23, 2015 at 8:54 PM Excellent write! Congratulations on your win!

Lin Lane November 23, 2015 at 11:50 AM Nicely written, Tim. Congrats.

James Inman November 23, 2015 at 10:57 AM Deep thoughts, Tim. Nice poem.

Balveen Cheema November 23, 2015 at 10:23 AM Congrats on your win, Tim!

Carrie Richards November 23, 2015 at 9:54 AM The title alone, drew me in !!! I want to sigh !!! :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 23, 2015 at 9:44 AM Congratulations Tim.

Pandita Sietesantos November 18, 2015 at 2:38 AM Tim, this string of Haiku is extraordinarily exquisite! Mine pales in comparison to this beautiful work of art! This is certainly a big time winner in my books - BRAVO and a 7, my friend! Pandita