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I See the Earth Move

watching a sunset on the beach at the ocean touching the skyline one quarter, one half bright, blazing red-orange clouds our star slowly sinks I am observing mighty Mother Earth spinning my mind blows gently... *For the Sunset contest sonsored by Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/27/2015 2:06:00 AM
Beautiful :)
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Date: 11/26/2015 7:05:00 PM
A picturesque trio of haiku! Congrats on your win, Tim! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/24/2015 10:09:00 AM
Tim, I really love the last one there. GREAT KU!! Leaving for Iowa this afternoon. Much to do and trying to catch up here first. I'll miss it. Have a fun thanksgiving.
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Date: 11/24/2015 4:12:00 AM
WOW, you blew my mind Tim, CONGRATS! On your sweet SunSet win. LOVE SKAT
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Date: 11/23/2015 8:54:00 PM
Excellent write! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/23/2015 11:50:00 AM
Nicely written, Tim. Congrats.
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Date: 11/23/2015 10:57:00 AM
Deep thoughts, Tim. Nice poem.
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Date: 11/23/2015 10:23:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Tim!
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Date: 11/23/2015 9:54:00 AM
The title alone, drew me in !!! I want to sigh !!! :)
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Date: 11/23/2015 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations Tim.
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Date: 11/18/2015 2:38:00 AM
Tim, this string of Haiku is extraordinarily exquisite! Mine pales in comparison to this beautiful work of art! This is certainly a big time winner in my books - BRAVO and a 7, my friend! Pandita
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