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In the below poem i explore real events, and My own thoughts..' I am then led to considet Am i representative of all humanity.? In wanting Peace.? If i am.? I see how the anti-christ of the End times will be able to control people. ' We need Jesus so so much is my final analysis.'

I see, much confusion '

I see..The struggle; the decision May 
fourteen ninteen forty eight.' Truman
Recognises Isreal I would have too.' The
Next day Arab armies attack, and are beaten back.' A fledgling State fighting to
Survive, yes i am for that.' Yet I am not for
The slaughter i see today, upon their neighbours, I am against all war especially wars to obtain others land..
How does humanity, mess it up so much?
Is it there to call in Jesus.? Is it academic
To argue this or that position.? I am
highly perplexed, and even more eager
For peace thsn before.)
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bard Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 5:08 PM
Maverick Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 9:43 PM
Hello Doug, I wondered where you Were.? Good to see you I can't answer on your initial box.' I dont Know why? Thank you for the information and comment.⭐🙌😄
bard Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 5:10 PM
How does humanity mess it up so much. Blacks Law Dictionary meaning of human being is monster. Concur with your ideology Joe Blessings Douglas😀
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August 13, 2026 at 2:51 PM
Joe, your poem has strong historical and emotional elements with a clear structure and rhythm. The message about the complexity of war and the yearning for peace is fair.
Maverick Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 10:29 PM
Thank you Sotto..I guess we are watching the birthpangs? spoken of in Scripture.' I watched the con-vid play out in Isreal, the Nation that most heavily administerd the 'Exoerimental drugs' how can that leader sleep.? Iyah is right on point in that expression just for that alone ( its a war crime as described in the Geneva conventiin ) wake up people.! This leader is evil..) Also i am an accidental i find.! Insider to the con-vid era..I am still to finish the memoir..)
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