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I See Love

I see love wetting a napkin cleaning a frowning face I see love holding a pocketbook outside the ladies dressing room I see love walking slowly holding hands I see love hurrying to keep up laughing I see love weeping the joy of a life together seeping out I see love looking back at me I know love for I have been seen …………loving 7/19/2021 I See Love – Poetry Contest

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Barbara Peckham

Date: 8/13/2021 7:23:00 PM

This is poignant and sweet . It has a a strength that comes to fruition in the last lines. Thank you for sharing.

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 8/4/2021 11:55:00 AM

I see love dripping through your words!! Very cute poem John!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/26/2021 11:48:00 AM

Hi John, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2021 11:00:00 AM

so sorry I missed you getting POTD but many congrats on this and your win in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Daisy Ward

Date: 7/25/2021 10:36:00 AM

A very beautiful poem, congrats on your win.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/25/2021 8:48:00 AM

Very lovely, very tender, John. Congratulations on your win!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/25/2021 7:57:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write. Yes, you sure do see Love. Have a blessed day...............

Carol Mitra

Date: 7/24/2021 11:43:00 PM

Oh my.....lovely John....Congrats on your win :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/24/2021 8:48:00 PM

Great write, John, I love the first stanza. Congratulations on Mystic Rose contest. Hugs Eve

Marilene Evans

Date: 7/24/2021 4:45:00 PM

Congratulations! We see love everywhere when we give love.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/24/2021 2:29:00 PM

Each blessed moment we see love we are rich beyond means, Lovely poem John, congrats .

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/22/2021 7:27:00 AM

Hi John, I agree that is love. Best wishes in the contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/22/2021 3:03:00 AM

Congratulations on potd I love this poem! Amazing writing. Love , Gina

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/21/2021 11:41:00 PM

I See Love is a beautiful write and deserving the honour of POTD..Delice

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/21/2021 6:31:00 PM

Love is an action word, and you have expressed this emotion so beautifully. "I see love looking back at me" So wonderful indeed. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/21/2021 3:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD, John. Touching, fascinating picture of Love! Best wishes ~ Mala

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/21/2021 3:35:00 PM

Beautifully-written and full of sincerity, the kind of poem I love. Congratulations on POTD!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/21/2021 2:14:00 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely p.o.t.d., John :) - // Anne-Lise :)

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/21/2021 1:33:00 PM

Love is indeed in the eye, or the mind of the observer, a blatantly deep simple, piece of verse, and fully deserving potd John congratulations, cheers David

Ken Rone

Date: 7/21/2021 11:24:00 AM

Wonderful! True Gumpian sentiments . Congratulations on your POTD John. - Ken

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/21/2021 10:05:00 AM

Dear John, I should say this is one of the beautiful pieces that teaches me a lot. I should see love in everything. This is true love. I've known this but forgotten. Thank you for reminding me of this.