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I See Daffodils

Brighter seems the morn
Winter's bite a memory,
I see daffodils.





Entry for
Spring Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchen
1/3/19

Copyright © Gary Smith | Year Posted 2019

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March 7, 2019 at 5:07 PM

I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

March 8, 2019 at 7:24 AM

Thank you Sara. :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 3, 2019 at 2:43 PM

and congrats on your win, Gary

March 3, 2019 at 4:05 PM

Thanks again Andrea. :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 3, 2019 at 2:42 PM

oooh, I love that last line. It made me think of the famous line: I see dead people from the ghost movie, but in stark contrast, you are seeing the light of spring!

March 3, 2019 at 4:05 PM

Thank you Andrea, I know the film you mean lol. :)

March 3, 2019 at 12:32 PM

We have many in the garden now Gary, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

March 3, 2019 at 12:43 PM

Thank you Jan. :)

Charles Messina

March 3, 2019 at 7:59 AM

And hopefully I will see them soon too (lol). Nice one, Gary. Congratulations on your placement...Charlie

March 3, 2019 at 8:25 AM

Thank you Charlie. :)

March 3, 2019 at 7:37 AM

Hi Gary, Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-)Alexis

March 3, 2019 at 7:15 AM

What a lovely poem, Gary. A FAVE for me. Congrats on your win.

March 3, 2019 at 5:15 PM

Thank you Line. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 3, 2019 at 6:26 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely Spring Haiku, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

March 3, 2019 at 6:41 AM

Thank you Ann-Lise. :)

March 3, 2019 at 5:49 AM

A lovely haiku with beautiful imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

March 3, 2019 at 6:11 AM

Thank you Tania. :)

Joseph P. DiMino

March 2, 2019 at 8:15 AM

And beautiful they are! Thank you for sharing, Gary.

March 2, 2019 at 8:22 AM

Thank you Joe. :)

March 2, 2019 at 6:54 AM

Very nice Gary :)

March 2, 2019 at 7:20 AM

Thank you Heidi. :)

March 1, 2019 at 6:10 PM

oh so beautiful Gary:-) hugs Jan xx

March 1, 2019 at 6:11 PM

Thank you Jan. :)

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