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Brighter seems the morn Winter's bite a memory, I see daffodils. Entry for Spring Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchen 1/3/19

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Date: 3/7/2019 5:07:00 PM
I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 3/8/2019 7:24:00 AM
Thank you Sara. :)
Date: 3/3/2019 2:43:00 PM
and congrats on your win, Gary
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Date: 3/3/2019 4:05:00 PM
Thanks again Andrea. :)
Date: 3/3/2019 2:42:00 PM
oooh, I love that last line. It made me think of the famous line: I see dead people from the ghost movie, but in stark contrast, you are seeing the light of spring!
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Date: 3/3/2019 4:05:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I know the film you mean lol. :)
Date: 3/3/2019 12:32:00 PM
We have many in the garden now Gary, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/3/2019 12:43:00 PM
Thank you Jan. :)
Date: 3/3/2019 7:59:00 AM
And hopefully I will see them soon too (lol). Nice one, Gary. Congratulations on your placement...Charlie
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Date: 3/3/2019 8:25:00 AM
Thank you Charlie. :)
Date: 3/3/2019 7:37:00 AM
Hi Gary, Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-)Alexis
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Date: 3/3/2019 7:15:00 AM
What a lovely poem, Gary. A FAVE for me. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/3/2019 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Line. :)
Date: 3/3/2019 6:26:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely Spring Haiku, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/3/2019 6:41:00 AM
Thank you Ann-Lise. :)
Date: 3/3/2019 5:49:00 AM
A lovely haiku with beautiful imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 3/3/2019 6:11:00 AM
Thank you Tania. :)
Date: 3/2/2019 8:15:00 AM
And beautiful they are! Thank you for sharing, Gary.
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Date: 3/2/2019 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Joe. :)
Date: 3/2/2019 6:54:00 AM
Very nice Gary :)
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Date: 3/2/2019 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. :)
Date: 3/1/2019 6:10:00 PM
oh so beautiful Gary:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/1/2019 6:11:00 PM
Thank you Jan. :)