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I See Beautiful

Beauty, in my eye, yet I do not hold you. Every curve, every contour, every everything. A desire in me, exceeding a need for breath. Undressing my soul with her very existence. That I could clothe myself in her wake. Immerse this broken in her healing. Fate has me in other unions, futile, desolate. Unrooted in fertile lands, and I am nothing. Lifted by your beautiful, I am everything.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/6/2016 12:36:00 AM

Gary, Congratulations on your "Beautiful-Acrostic Win." ~LINDA~

Gary Gene Linney
Date: 1/6/2016 12:26:00 PM

Thank you very much :)

Skat A

Date: 1/3/2016 11:18:00 PM

GARY, CONGRATS on your win. skat

Gary Gene Linney
Date: 1/6/2016 12:27:00 PM

Thank you very much :)

Lin Lane

Date: 1/1/2016 7:29:00 PM

This was very lovely, Gary. I enjoyed it very much. Well done.

Gary Gene Linney
Date: 1/3/2016 4:38:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind reply :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/1/2016 4:57:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful Gary congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Gene Linney
Date: 1/1/2016 5:05:00 PM

Thank you very much, you are very kind.I must admit I saw the competition, wrote my entry and then realised that it was supposed to rhyme, but I am happy as is. Thanks again x x

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 1/1/2016 4:29:00 PM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Gary.

Gary Gene Linney
Date: 1/1/2016 4:32:00 PM

Thank you very much :)