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I See a Carnival Moon

It’s a carnival moon, the goose reported. We ran out of our cozy houses to see for ourselves. It looks like a common ordinary moon a rabbit said. Two voles agreed; no imagination I guess. I see it! I reported, and it is marvelous! The mice argued that they could not see it. Wait! A tiny mouse said. Yes, maybe I see a face. Suddenly all of the animals saw a face. But do you see a carnival face? I asked. I see the carnival face! the goose reported. The rest of them began fighting and biting. Some could see the carnival face, others could not. The goose and I had a laugh about this later.

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Date: 3/19/2022 9:56:00 PM
You had them on a wild goose chase. Good one
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/20/2022 3:48:00 AM
I love a bit of teasing all in "fun" at no one's expense.
Date: 3/19/2022 7:53:00 PM
Absolutely enchanting.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/20/2022 3:48:00 AM
Thank you Hank,

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