I See

I see 
I see that life is no longer the place for me 
I think that the fact that the darkness of life 
Many which are not in the time of ignorance 
Where a lot of hatred and injustice 

And I became a stranger in the world of 
Became more than spoilers Reformers 
Became more than the bad guys are good 
Became more tears dripped who erase 
Became more than it grieves the heart rejoices 

Became a good crook 
Ok became a crook 
Money has become a target 
Love and became a target 

Forest became the world 
Became the strong eat the weak 
Became strong arrogant 
Became a strong rotten 

Became the Akeana 
I do not want to live poorly 
Not to be strong 
I see that life is no longer the place for me

                                                     11-1-2014
                                                        17h46
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kamoonpuri Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 11:46 AM
A hardhitting poem on today's materialistic rat race world. Yes paradise only wud be the best world. Excellent wording! Keep writing
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