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I See

I saw something in you I thought I would never see in a girl. When our eyes first met, there was feeling in me I couldn’t control. I wanted you, I needed you. But I guess you didn’t want me. The feeling I felt inside my soul, you must have never felt. I was nothing to you, but you were more to me then you could ever imagine. Now that were dead and done, I have one thing to ask you, did you ever want me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/7/2012 12:59:00 PM
don't wait for an answer, if its dead and done don't go throwing gas on fire again,nice write Skyler
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Date: 6/5/2012 11:56:00 AM
wonderfully written with pure skill and craft. I like your words the unique sequence they use to bring out the meaning of your poem.
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