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I see

A lone butterfly hover to check more symmetry in wasted flowers, agonizing a young kitten who had just learnt to leap, making its mother think deep.

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Paige Hind

Date: 9/18/2024 3:09:00 PM

Kind of different of a take here, it's lovely

thriveni c mysore
Date: 9/18/2024 8:51:00 PM

Thank you for your pleasant visit dear poet. I am glad you liked it. thank you for the kind words. Blessings & cheers.

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/18/2024 12:34:00 PM

Maybe of catnip, to rejuvanate her youth ? Lovley light reading Thriveni.)

thriveni c mysore
Date: 9/18/2024 8:50:00 PM

yes, it might work well. Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. your visit and words brings me joy. Blessings & cheers.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2024 3:52:00 PM

Very interesting little verse, Thriveni

thriveni c mysore
Date: 9/17/2024 9:39:00 PM

Thank you for your kind reading dear poet friend. I am glad to know you find it interesting. Your visit & words is a blessing. Thank you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/17/2024 12:50:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your fun "I See" write. Few words here tell a lovely story... Have a wonderful day writing away.................

thriveni c mysore
Date: 9/17/2024 9:38:00 PM

I am so glad you liked it dear poet friend. Thank you for your kind & cheerful visit. I am grateful to you for your Blessings & Wishes. Thank you.