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I Saw You Today

Lost in my search for some item on the shelves, I turn to push the cart forward, and there you are! I am stunned, because I thought I'd never see you again. I stop and watch you. I'd forgotten you stood that way. I'd forgotten you made that face. I know it's not you. But I stand there, very still not wanting to break the spell. The stranger turns, and you are gone... The stranger and I exchange smiles. Gratitude fills me that for a moment I saw you. December 6, 2018

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Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 1/10/2019 2:58:00 PM

There is something archetypical about the scene and event you describe. I find it evocative and a little haunting.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/10/2019 6:54:00 PM

Thank you for the feed back. I appreciate your visit :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/16/2018 7:02:00 PM

Sometimes, seeing someone you know, in someone you don't, is very comforting. This is beautiful and tender. Congratulations P.S. AWTRY, on this win. ~ Brandy

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/16/2018 8:09:00 PM

yes, thank you Brandy :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/16/2018 3:30:00 PM

Sometimes we think we see a lost love again, but maybe something in the back of our mind just wanted to find them again, P.S. We call all relate to your feelings here. Nicely penned. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/16/2018 5:13:00 PM

thank you, Carolyn :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/16/2018 2:40:00 PM

This poem really reaches the heart. When my son was 14 and left to live with his father I missed him so much I felt like hugging strangers that resembled him. I could really relate to your sweet and sensitive poem. Congratulations on your top win! : )

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/16/2018 5:13:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. :)