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I Saw You Smile

I saw you smile the other day Which took my breath from me Memories of yesterday And how things used to be Laughter in the moonlight Giggles in the wind Time we took for granted Can never be again Kisses in the morning At the break of day As raindrops softly glisten Apex of the suns way Shadows in the darkness Dancing in the sky Holding hands together Looking eye to eye Tender gentle touched Etched deep within my mind Will stay with me forever Until the end of time Yes, I saw you smile the other day And had to catch my breath For I still love you baby Even after death

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Cosimiero Writer

Date: 10/27/2008 2:13:00 AM

dear rene: i am only 25 years old and ive lost 2 of my best friends to tragedies. the pain is always present and always hard to deal with. i also wish there was something i could do, or some words i could say that would help you. speaking from experience, i know there isnt. keep living your life, keep the pen moving and spill your heart onto that paper. thats the only thing that keeps me going. beautifully written. god bless.