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I Saw This New Moon

i saw this new moon just yesterday beside this flooded hut the niger has eaten the homeland 'tis like a casualty one of the good casualties the casualties the big bro saw during our war that war that led to the skeleton-men beside this now flooded hut ah, we lost the hut to the new fat river yet i saw this lean moon

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Date: 11/9/2012 8:15:00 AM
I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Canny. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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