I Saw Spring Today

I saw Spring today,
or rather,
it saw me.
Its crocus-head bonnet
filled my face
'til I could breathe no more.
It bid me take my cue
and inhale the sun's corona,
as petals told me of their colors.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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January 8, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Its coming!! Wonderful simple but strongly descriptive write here, Orma. I look forward to see lots more from you and thank you for your comments on my writing. Hope '09 is a great year!!
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