Rama Balasubramanian Poet Rhyme

I Saw Real Ghost

Was coming back from market one night
Unfortunately there were no street light
Saw an old lady sitting on top of a car
Her face was wrinkled without a scar
She had thick, long, shining silver hair
With piercing eyes at me she did stare
I walked fast without turning back
Felt she was following me behind my back
Reaching home I was in tear
My whole body shook in fear
An old lady that too atop a car
It was indeed bizarre
Was she a ghost? Am not sure
But I did see her, I am sure

Note: A real happening.

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Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2020 at 10:57 AM - Congratulations on your real Halloween story, Rama ... wooow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Rama Balasubramanian October 16, 2020 at 11:52 AM Thanks and same to you. Have a great weekend. hugs Rama

Linda Alice Fowler October 15, 2020 at 12:16 PM Nicely told story Rama. Congratulations on the win! Linda Rama Balasubramanian October 16, 2020 at 2:49 AM A real story Thanks and same to you. Take care Rama

Carolyn Devonshire October 15, 2020 at 10:48 AM Rama, I believe you. I saw a ghost at Monmouth University and later learned one professor and many other students had seen the same spirit. Enjoyed your poem! Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn Rama Balasubramanian October 16, 2020 at 2:45 AM Want to know more about what you saw. Did you write s poem on it? Was not sure what I saw was ghost, but it did scare me. Thanks for the beautiful contest and the placement. God bless you. Take care. Rama

Sam Kauffman October 11, 2020 at 10:16 AM Rama, that really was a "spooky" experience. No wonder you can describe it with so much vivid detail! Thank you for sharing! Rama Balasubramanian October 16, 2020 at 2:48 AM It was indeed spooky. Iwas so scared and cried for long time after that. Was it Ghost? Not sure. Take care, Rama