I Saw It In the Mirror a Loop Poem

The prompt for our group was "I saw it the mirror, I saw it in my face"
If eyes are windows to the soul I saw mine in the mirror Mirrors don’t lie they are simply a reflection Reflections bear witness to our personal reality Reality is our truth desired or not it is there There is no running from what hides in our soul Souls are seen in the mirror and I saw mine in my face Face what’s harbored in my soul…. this is my journey Journey if you dare it is a centripetal force
AgMoore©03/28/11
This is a loop poem, since there is no info here is a link to show how to do it (it's really easy = ) ))
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/looppoetry.html
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Ross Jr. Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 11:44 PM
Excellent write nifty form....with love...old Jack
Johnson Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 1:23 AM
Yes the mirrors often speak to me, sometimes pictures come to see, My grand daughter standing there, in the mirror, blondish hair... Yes she came to see, beautiful g/child to be, she is here born, with us, our family care, Laura is a plus:) as she had promised me.
Moore Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 9:38 PM
Don that is lovely.....
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 9:53 AM
It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Amanda. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work. Love, Carol
Moore Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 12:07 PM
Gosh Carol thanks so much!
Aboobacker Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 6:00 PM
interesting style and a nice read :)
Moore Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 10:32 PM
thank you again Anula you're very sweet!
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