I Saw Hope

Like a lonely ship blue carpet beneath Wandering in the infinite Dawn to dusk None in the sight Like rays of East Spreading orange In the blue room Impregnating energy Abolishing gloom Like a throbbing heart Trapped in a cage Pulsating with force Keeping alive The otherwise corse Like a dusky cloud Drops from within Descending for growth Only to witness Terrestrial blowth Like a candle lighted In darkest dwelling Glowing at fullest For a broken heart Becoming earnest

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/19/2024 7:12:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Weston Gregory

Date: 4/14/2021 7:47:00 AM

Hi lovely piece Its expanse weave a good vibes.