I Saw Hope

Like a lonely ship
blue carpet beneath
Wandering in the infinite
Dawn to dusk
None in the sight

Like rays of East
Spreading orange
In the blue room
Impregnating energy
Abolishing gloom

Like a throbbing heart
Trapped in a cage
Pulsating with force
Keeping alive
The otherwise corse

Like a dusky cloud
Drops from within
Descending for growth
Only to witness
Terrestrial blowth

Like a candle lighted
In darkest dwelling
Glowing at fullest
For a broken heart
Becoming earnest

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/19/2024 7:12:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Weston Gregory

Date: 4/14/2021 7:47:00 AM

Hi lovely piece Its expanse weave a good vibes.