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I Saw God But Now What

As smoothly As errant sunshine I saw him As he disappeared Behind a tree Watched As he crept across The sky line A peeping tom Dancing amid the high rise Windows Of lost souls I saw him melt A bearded snowman Watched spring Fill its empty hat With rain To cool The roses blush I saw him walking In the midst of those Who cannot see And smiled He smiled back.

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Date: 4/21/2024 12:36:00 AM
Hi John , cleverly written , and unique in style, which I really enjoyed , it was like a breath of fresh air . Danny
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Date: 4/12/2024 5:09:00 PM
a captivating poem, John. I especially liked "I saw him walking In the midst of those Who cannot see And smiled He smiled back." Best wishes with the contest. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 4/12/2024 4:18:00 PM
Couldn't agree with you more, John... Who'd you say is your optometrist??
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